Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more concise. Start with a direct topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Use correct tense and singular/plural forms, avoid repetition, and link ideas with simple connectors (for example, "because" or "so").

Exemplo: Yes, I often remember my dreams. For example, I once dreamed about meeting someone very important to me, and that dream felt so vivid that it stayed in my memory. Because it was emotionally meaningful, it remains my favorite dream.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a clear reason in one or two sentences. Use correct grammar for negatives and possessives ("I don't share my dreams"). Use linking words like "because" to explain, and avoid long, repetitive clauses.

Exemplo: No, I don't usually share my dreams with others because I prefer to keep my personal goals private. I also find that people sometimes misunderstand or judge those dreams, so I only tell a few close friends.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first and then support it with a specific explanation or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" and avoid vague phrases. Keep to 2–3 sentences maximum.

Exemplo: Yes, I think dreams can have special meanings because they often reflect our private thoughts and desires. For example, dreaming about success might show your ambition or current worries about your future.

Sugestão: Give a direct response and then describe concrete steps you are taking. Use correct verb forms and clear nouns (e.g., "IELTS" not "ILS"), and keep supporting details specific and coherent instead of listing unrelated items.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true. For example, I am preparing for the IELTS exam by practicing speaking and taking mock tests, and I also plan to study abroad with my parents, which would help me achieve my goal.

× Yes, that I have one dreams and that becomes true right now and this is the one where one person I love too much and the person I love in my life and this is the one of type of my dreams so that's why I remember in my life this dreams is my best dreams in my life.

✓ Yes, I had one dream that has become true, and it is about a person I love very much; this dream is the best one I remember.

Original contains plural/singular mismatches ('one dreams', 'this dreams'), redundant phrases, and awkward tense. Use singular 'dream' after 'one' and adjust verbs to past/simple present perfect for relevance ('had', 'has become'). Remove repetition and condense for clarity.

× No, I didn't share dream with other people's because what your goals do not share with another person because many persons talk about your dreams and some many people to share about your dreams so you don't share your dreams with others and I'm not interested to other dreams.

✓ No, I don't share my dreams with other people because you should not share your goals with others; many people talk about your dreams and share them, so I prefer not to, and I am not interested in other people's dreams.

Original mixes past and present ('didn't', 'do not') and uses incorrect possessives and articles. Use present simple 'don't share' for habitual action, correct possessive 'my dreams' and 'other people', and reorder sentences for coherence.

× The dream special meanings like your private life and your what your dream of your life you are living your dream life. So this is the private life meaning of the dream.

✓ Dreams can have special meanings related to your private life and your aspirations; they reflect the life you want to live.

Original has incorrect and repetitive pronouns ('your what your dream') and awkward structure. Use general subject 'dreams', clarify relation 'related to your private life and aspirations', and simplify sentence structure.

× Yes, of course I make my dreams come true and now I practicing two ILS more exam tastes and more tastes and speaking tastes and I want my goal comes true in past exams and I'm cooking with my parents with abroad and this is the dream comes true.

✓ Yes, of course I want to make my dreams come true. Now I am practicing for two IELTS exams, especially the listening and speaking tests, and I hope my goal will be achieved so I can go abroad with my parents; that would make my dream come true.

Original mixes tenses and has incorrect verb forms ('I make', 'I practicing', 'comes true in past exams', 'I'm cooking with my parents with abroad'). Use present progressive 'am practicing' for current actions, 'will be achieved' for future hopes, correct exam name 'IELTS', and fix collocations ('go abroad with my parents').