Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Покращте граматику й природність висловлювання: уникайте зайвих пауз та зайвих слів, використовуйте чітке підтвердження й коротке пояснення. Також замініть некоректні форми ("that dreams I had") на природніші структури і скоротіть відповідь до максимум 4–5 речень.

Exemplo: Yes, I can remember my dreams. When I was younger, I often dreamed of becoming a judge because I wanted to help make society fairer. I felt that this role would let me resolve disputes and protect people’s rights. That idea motivated many of my choices at school.

Sugestão: Зверніть увагу на зв'язність і логічність: використовуйте сполучники правильно, уникайте повторів і зайвих фраз. Дайте чітке пояснення причини й приклад, щоб зробити відповідь конкретною.

Exemplo: I only share my dreams with close friends and family because I prefer their honest support and advice. If I told everyone, I’d worry about criticism or losing motivation. For example, when I told my sister about studying law, she helped me plan the steps I needed to take.

Sugestão: Покращте граматику (узгодження дієслів і чисел), структуру й чіткість думки: сформулюйте основну тезу, потім додайте 1–2 конкретні приклади або причини із логічними сполучниками. Уникайте повторів ("what what").

Exemplo: Yes, I believe dreams can have special meaning because they often reflect our goals and values. For instance, dreaming about helping others might indicate a desire to pursue a caring career. Therefore, dreams can guide our decisions and motivate us to keep working toward our aims.

Sugestão: Зосередьтесь на точності мови та структурі: змініть неформальні вставки ("uh") і виправте узгодження ("dreams is" → "dreams are" або "my dream is"). Додайте конкретні кроки або плани, щоб відповідь була переконливішою і конкретнішою.

Exemplo: Yes, I definitely want to make my dreams come true because they shape my future life, including my career and family plans. For example, I plan to study law and gain work experience through internships so I can earn enough to support a stable family life and pursue my goals.

× I used to dream of being a judge because I thought it a good opportunity to help the world be more fair.

✓ I used to dream of becoming a judge because I thought it was a good opportunity to help make the world fairer.

The phrase 'being a judge' is acceptable, but 'becoming a judge' is more natural when describing a past habitual aspiration. 'Thought it a good opportunity' lacks the verb 'was' (There is a missing linking verb), so 'thought it was a good opportunity' corrects the sentence (this relates to verb forms and sentence structure). 'Help the world be more fair' is awkward; use 'help make the world fairer' for natural comparative form and verb usage. Suggestion: use 'becoming' for aspirations, include the linking verb 'was', and change 'be more fair' to 'fairer' or 'make the world fairer'. (Explanation in English) 'becoming' як природніша конструкція для наміру; додати 'was' після 'thought' для зв'язку; 'fairer' краще як ступінь порівняння.

× I share my dreams with others but only with my close friends or family because if I share my dreams with everyone it and it will not happen.

✓ I share my dreams with others but only with my close friends or family because if I share them with everyone, they will not come true.

Pronoun reference is incorrect and redundant. 'It and it will not happen' is ungrammatical. Replace repeated noun with plural pronoun 'them' to refer to 'dreams' and use 'they will not come true' to express that dreams won't happen. Suggestion: use consistent plural pronouns to match 'dreams' and a natural verb phrase 'come true'. (Explanation in English) Використовуйте 'them' для 'dreams' і 'come true' для 'не здійсняться'.

× I will feel like I lose and it's the reason why I choose to share the dreams only with my close friends or family.

✓ I will feel like I have lost, and that's the reason why I choose to share my dreams only with my close friends or family.

Mixes tenses and incorrect verb forms. 'I will feel like I lose' is incorrect; use 'I will feel like I have lost' or 'I will feel like I've lost' to convey the sense of loss. 'Share the dreams' should be 'share my dreams' for clarity and correct possessive. 'It's the reason why' is more naturally 'that's the reason why'. Suggestion: keep tense consistent (future feeling about a past/perceived loss) and use possessive 'my'. (Explanation in English) Узгодження чисел і часів: використовуйте 'have lost' або 'I've lost' і 'my dreams'.

× Yeah, I think so, because dreams is like a small affirmation.

✓ Yeah, I think so, because dreams are like small affirmations.

Subject-verb agreement error: 'dreams' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also 'a small affirmation' uses singular article with plural noun; revise to plural 'small affirmations' or rephrase as 'a small affirmation' with singular subject 'a dream'. Suggestion: match verb number to subject and ensure noun number consistency. (Explanation in English) 'dreams' — множина, тому 'are'; узгодьте форму іменника ('affirmations').

× It's like also your goal, which you can follow through your life.

✓ It's also like your goal, which you can pursue throughout your life.

Awkward word order and verb choice. 'It's like also your goal' is better as 'It's also like your goal' or simply 'It's like your goal'. 'Follow through your life' is unnatural; use 'pursue throughout your life'. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions and use appropriate verbs ('pursue'). (Explanation in English) Переставте 'also' перед 'like' або після 'is', і змініть 'follow' на 'pursue' та 'throughout your life' для природності.

× And I think dreams also help us to understand what we can achieve what what we have to do for it and why we don't have to stop now.

✓ I think dreams also help us understand what we can achieve, what we have to do to achieve it, and why we shouldn't stop now.

Sentence has repeated 'what' and poor conjunction use. Remove duplicate 'what', break ideas with commas, and use parallel structure: 'what we can achieve, what we have to do, and why we shouldn't stop now.' Replace 'don't have to stop' (means unnecessary to stop) with 'shouldn't stop' (means we must continue). Suggestion: use parallel clauses and correct modal for intended meaning. (Explanation in English) Приберіть дублювання 'what', використовуйте паралельну структуру і 'shouldn't' замість 'don't have to' для вираження припущення продовження.

× Yeah, sure. I absolutely want my dreams to come true because my dreams is really connected with my future life, uh, with money, with family, and I would like to live my dream life.

✓ Yeah, sure. I absolutely want my dreams to come true because my dreams are really connected with my future life, with money and family, and I would like to live my dream life.

Subject-verb agreement: 'my dreams' is plural, so use 'are' not 'is'. Also streamline 'with money, with family' to 'with money and family' for natural coordination. Suggestion: ensure verbs agree with plural subjects and keep coordinate items parallel. (Explanation in English) 'dreams' — множина, тому 'are'; згрупуйте елементи переліку правильно.