Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence saying whether you remember dreams, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid unclear phrases like "what I'm drinking for" and reduce hesitation. Use linking words (for example, "and", "because", "so") and keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. For example, some dreams are very vivid and emotional, and other times I have nightmares that make me wake up feeling anxious, so I often look for comfort from family or by listening to music.

Sugestão: Answer directly and correct confusing words. Begin with a clear yes/no or brief statement about your interest, then give a specific example of who you discuss dreams with and how they usually react. Use linking words like "but" to show contrast and avoid repeating words incorrectly.

Exemplo: Yes, I am interested in other people’s dreams. I often talk about my dreams with close friends, but they usually say they cannot remember their dreams, so our conversations are mostly one-sided.

Sugestão: Give a concise opinion and support it with clear reasons and a specific example. Avoid repetition and filler words. Use linking words ("because", "for example", "however") and more precise vocabulary like "disturbing" or "uplifting" instead of repeating adverbs.

Exemplo: Yes, I think dreams can reflect our emotions because when I am stressed I often have disturbing nightmares, while when I feel happy my dreams tend to be uplifting and emotional. For example, before exams I had several anxious dreams about failing.

Sugestão: Respond more directly and organize your ideas: state clearly whether you want dreams to come true, then explain with one or two reasons and an example. Remove fillers and hesitations. Use contrasting linking words like "but" or "however" to show difference between pleasant and unpleasant dreams.

Exemplo: Sometimes I would like pleasant dreams to come true, for example if I dream about meeting a celebrity I would enjoy that, but I would never want a nightmare to become real because it would be frightening and upsetting.

× Yes, I always remember what I'm drinking for and sometimes the drink will become vivid or emotional.

✓ Yes, I always remember what I dream about, and sometimes the dream becomes vivid or emotional.

The original uses an incorrect verb phrase 'what I'm drinking for' which confuses meaning and tense. Use 'remember what I dream about' to match the present habitual action and 'becomes' (simple present) for general statements about dreams. Suggestion: use 'remember' + 'what I dream about' and simple present verb agreement.

× Furthermore, I usually have nightmares and at the at this time I will seek for comfort.

✓ Furthermore, I usually have nightmares, and at that time I will seek comfort.

Redundant words ('at the at this time') and incorrect preposition 'seek for' cause the sentence structure problem. Use 'at that time' and the verb 'seek' without 'for' when followed by an object. Suggestion: remove redundancy and use correct verb pattern: 'seek comfort.'

× Yes, I'm really interested in what I mean everyone drink for and sometimes I will discuss this with my friends but they always tell me they don't remember their dream.

✓ Yes, I'm really interested in what everyone dreams about, and sometimes I discuss this with my friends, but they always tell me they don't remember their dreams.

The phrase 'what I mean everyone drink for' is ungrammatical and unclear. Use 'what everyone dreams about' to express interest in others' dreams. Use simple present 'discuss' for habitual actions and plural 'dreams' to match 'they.' Suggestion: replace unclear phrase with 'what everyone dreams about,' use simple present for habits, and pluralize 'dreams.'

× Yes, definitely, because sometimes when I, when I'm in a bad mood and at night I will dream, I will have, I will have nightmare and or sometimes when I feel happy and the dream will be fascinate, fascinating and very emotional.

✓ Yes, definitely, because sometimes when I'm in a bad mood at night I have nightmares, and sometimes when I feel happy the dreams are fascinating and very emotional.

Multiple issues: unnecessary future 'will' is used for habitual past/present events (use simple present), 'have nightmare' needs plural 'nightmares,' and 'fascinate' is the verb form; the correct adjective is 'fascinating.' Also 'the dream' should be plural 'the dreams' when speaking generally. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual occurrences, pluralize 'nightmares/dreams,' and use the adjective 'fascinating.'

× MMM, maybe when I dream, I, uh, hang out with some celebrities, but if I have nightmare, I would not to umm, let's let the dream come true.

✓ Maybe when I dream I hang out with some celebrities, but if I have a nightmare I would not let the dream come true.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'nightmare,' incorrect infinitive 'would not to let' (extra 'to'), and unnecessary filler words. 'Would not let' is the correct conditional form. Suggestion: include the article 'a,' remove 'to' after 'would not,' and streamline the sentence.

× It would be very scary and but I think if I'm in I'm, I'm with celebrating, I will.

✓ It would be very scary, but I think if I'm celebrating with someone, I would want it to happen.

The original has disfluent repetition and wrong tense/modal pairing. 'If I'm celebrating' (present continuous for a situation) pairs with 'I would want' (conditional) for clarity. Also 'with celebrating' is incorrect; use 'celebrating with someone.' Suggestion: remove repetitions, choose appropriate conditional structure, and correct prepositional phrase.