Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct by using a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Correct verb tense and article use, and avoid redundancy. For example, say when and how often you remember dreams and briefly mention why.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually remember my dreams. Every morning I spend a few minutes thinking about them, and most of the time I can recall at least one scene or feeling from the previous night.

Sugestão: Combine short fragments into fluent sentences and fix word order and punctuation. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add brief supporting detail about frequency and who you tell. Use linking words like 'usually' or 'sometimes' to make it coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually share my dreams with my partner every morning. If a dream involves someone I know, I often tell them about it because it feels interesting or funny.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first and then support it with one or two coherent reasons. Avoid sentence fragments and ensure subject-verb agreement. Use linking words like 'however' correctly to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I don't think dreams always have special meanings. From what I've read, they are usually connected to a person's thoughts and experiences; however, some people believe that certain vivid dreams may have deeper significance.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a brief, fluent explanation with correct grammar. Use conditionals properly and connect ideas smoothly. Provide a clear reason why making a particular dream come true is unrealistic or desirable.

Exemplo: Not really — I don't expect my dreams to come true. For instance, I dreamed about a dragon last night, so that kind of dream is obviously impossible to make real.

× Yes, every morning I try to remember what I dream last night and I usually get it.

✓ Yes, every morning I try to remember what I dreamed last night and I usually can.

The sentence mixes present simple with a past time expression 'last night'. Use the past tense 'dreamed' to match the past time reference. Also replace 'get it' with 'can' or 'remember it' for clarity. Suggestion: use consistent tense with time markers and a clearer verb: 'I usually remember it.'

× Yes, with my partner we usually share our dreams every morning after wake up.

✓ Yes, my partner and I usually share our dreams every morning after waking up.

Word order and preposition/verb form are incorrect. Use 'my partner and I' for correct subject order and 'after waking up' (gerund) after 'after'. Also remove the preposition 'with' before the subject. This yields a natural, grammatical sentence.

× And if I dream with someone I know. I would probably tell. Him about the dream.

✓ And if I dream about someone I know, I would probably tell him about the dream.

The original has incorrect sentence breaks and preposition choice. Use 'dream about someone' (not 'dream with' unless physically dreaming together) and combine into one sentence with a comma. Place 'him' directly after the verb 'tell' and keep it lowercase. Ensure pronoun placement and punctuation are correct.

× Not really, what I have read about dreams is that. Are connected with the person thoughts and experience, however.

✓ Not really. What I have read about dreams is that they are connected with a person's thoughts and experiences; however, I think some special people can have special dreams.

The original contains fragmented sentences and missing subject 'they'. 'Person thoughts' should be 'a person's thoughts' (possessive) and 'experience' should be plural 'experiences' for general meaning. Also combine with 'however' using proper punctuation. Provide a complete, coherent sentence.

× Do you want to make your dreams come true?

✓ Do you want to make your dreams come true?

This sentence is already correct. 'Make ... come true' is the correct structure; no change needed.

× Not at all. If my dreams come true would be hilarious. Last night I dream with a dragon, so it's very impossible.

✓ Not at all. If my dreams came true, it would be hilarious. Last night I dreamed about a dragon, so it's very unlikely.

Conditional sentence needs past subjunctive 'came' and result clause 'would be'. 'Dream' with past time 'last night' requires past tense 'dreamed'. Use 'dreamed about a dragon' and prefer 'unlikely' instead of 'very impossible' which is not idiomatic. This fixes conditional form, tense consistency, and preposition usage.