Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify and simplify the response, use correct tense and word choice, remove repetitions, and add one specific example. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'but' or 'however' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I usually can't remember my dreams, but sometimes I recall a few details just before I wake up. For example, once I remembered dreaming about walking through my childhood home. However, the memories are often fragmented and fade quickly after I get up.

Sugestão: Correct grammar (prepositions and verb forms), avoid repetition, and be more specific about how often and with whom you share dreams. Use linking words such as 'because' or 'so' to explain your interest.

Exemplo: I sometimes tell close friends about my dreams because they find them entertaining. I'm also curious about other people's dreams and whether two people can dream about the same person. So occasionally we compare stories to see any similarities.

Sugestão: Fix word choice and grammar, give a clear opinion in the topic sentence, then provide a reason and an example. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' to connect ideas and be specific about what you mean by 'emotions'.

Exemplo: I think dreams can reflect a person's emotions rather than having fixed meanings. For example, if I'm stressed about an exam, I often dream about failing because my worries carry into sleep. However, some people believe dreams can be warnings or omens.

Sugestão: Make the answer direct and coherent: state clearly which kinds of dreams you want to come true and give a specific realistic example. Correct tense and phrasing, and avoid vague phrasing like 'I already a good future'.

Exemplo: Yes, I would like some of my dreams to come true, especially positive ones about my future. For instance, I often dream about having a stable job and enough money, and I hope to achieve that in real life by studying and working hard.

× Most of the time I didn't remember all the dreams that I've had, but whenever I had, usually it's it's only a tiny bit of details just before I woke up.

✓ Most of the time I don't remember all the dreams I've had, but when I do, usually it's just a tiny bit of detail right before I wake up.

Mixed past and present tenses and redundancy: 'didn't remember' conflicts with present perfect 'I've had' and the general time frame; use present 'don't remember' for habitual action. 'Whenever I had' is incorrect; use 'when I do'. 'It's it's' is repetition. Use 'just a tiny bit of detail' (uncountable) and 'wake up' (present simple to match habitual context).

× The dining part of the details if I remember the my dream.

✓ I remember only the final part of the dream.

Sentence is ungrammatical and contains wrong words: 'dining' seems incorrect (likely 'ending'), and 'the my dream' has an extra article 'the' before 'my'. Simplify to 'I remember only the final part of the dream' for clarity and correct pronoun/article use.

× I sometimes share my dreams to others and I'm also interested in other streams like what kind of dreams they have.

✓ I sometimes share my dreams with others and I'm also interested in other people's dreams, like what kind of dreams they have.

Use 'share with' not 'share to'. 'Other streams' is wrong word choice; use 'other people's dreams' to indicate possession. Added comma and wording for natural English.

× And sometimes I'm curious that if I dream on this person, will he or she also sing or dreams the same thing as mine?

✓ Sometimes I'm curious whether, if I dream about a person, he or she will also dream the same thing as me.

Use 'whether' for indirect yes/no question and 'dream about' not 'dream on'. 'Sing' is incorrect context; likely 'also dream'. Use 'dream' (base form) after auxiliary; 'dreams' should be 'dream'. Use 'the same thing as me' (comparative pronoun) or 'as I do'.

× It depends on the triumph and some say that dreams are like a warning sign that this might happened, but for me it is like your emotions all that form into that kind of dream.

✓ It depends on the interpretation; some say that dreams are like a warning sign that something might happen, but for me they are formed from your emotions.

Several errors: 'triumph' is wrong word; 'interpretation' or 'situation' fits. 'This might happened' mixes modal with past participle; correct is 'something might happen'. Subject-verb agreement: 'dreams... they are'. Use clear passive/active: 'formed from your emotions'.

× Yes, especially if it's an unhappy dream. Oh like I already bought an iPhone and I already a good future or have a money on my dream. I wish that it would come true in reality.

✓ Yes, especially if it's an unhappy dream. For example, I once dreamed that I had already bought an iPhone and already had a good future or money. I wish that would come true in reality.

Tense and article errors: 'I already bought an iPhone' in a dream should be past perfect or simple past in reported dream context; 'I once dreamed that I had already bought an iPhone' is clearer. 'Have a money' is incorrect; use 'money' without article or 'some money'. 'I wish that would come true' is acceptable; avoid redundant 'in reality'.