Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 文法と語彙の誤りを直し、より自然で簡潔な表現にすること。具体的には時制と冠詞の誤り（"When I have sick" → "When I'm sick"）、複数形や前置詞の使い方、冗長な表現を改善してください。またSupporting detailは1〜2文にまとめ、接続詞を使って論理的に繋げる練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I can. When I'm sick, I often have nightmares. For example, I sometimes dream that I can't open the door or go outside, which makes me feel very anxious.

Sugestão: 発音や文法の小さな誤りに注意しつつ、自然な語順と形容詞の使い方を学んでください（"which is shame" → "which is a shame"）。具体的には主語と目的語の一致、冠詞の使用、感情表現を短く明確にする練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often tell my husband about my dreams, especially the funny ones. Unfortunately, he usually doesn't pay much attention, which is a shame.

Sugestão: 意味が伝わりにくい文を避け、主張を明確に述べてから具体例を添えてください。文法（複数形・所有格・動詞の一致）と語彙の選択（"activity"の不適切な使用）を直す必要があります。また、不要な繰り返しを避けて一貫した表現を使ってください。

Exemplo: I don't really think dreams have special meanings. One of my friends, however, believes they do and often interprets her dreams for fun.

Sugestão: 理由の説明を明確にし、語彙の誤用（"name"や"recently"）を正してください。目的や具体例は簡潔にまとめ、接続詞でつなげて論理的に話す練習をしましょう。また時制と冠詞の使い方を確認してください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. My dreams encourage me to try new things. For example, I am studying harder every day because my recent dream is to attend a university in Australia.

× When I have sick, I often have a nightmare.

✓ When I am sick, I often have a nightmare.

'Have sick' is incorrect in English. Use the verb 'be' with the adjective 'sick' to describe a state: 'I am sick'. This is present simple describing a habitual condition. Improvement: use 'I am sick' or 'when I'm ill'.

× For example, in the dreams I cannot open the door and I cannot go outside, which makes me anxious.

✓ For example, in my dreams I cannot open the door and I cannot go outside, which makes me anxious.

Use 'my dreams' instead of 'in the dreams' to indicate dreams belonging to the speaker. This is a possessive noun phrase issue and also word choice; the rest of the sentence is grammatically correct in simple present when describing recurring dream content.

× Yes I do. I often share my dream with my husband, especially the funny dream.

✓ Yes, I do. I often share my dreams with my husband, especially the funny ones.

Singular 'dream' and 'the funny dream' conflict with 'often' which implies multiple instances. Change to plural 'dreams' and 'the funny ones' to refer to multiple funny dreams. Also add comma after 'Yes'.

× However, my husband doesn't care about my dream, which is shame.

✓ However, my husband doesn't care about my dreams, which is a shame.

'Shame' needs the article 'a' when used as 'a shame' to express pity. Also pluralize 'dream' to 'dreams' to match previous sentence. 'Which is a shame' is the correct idiomatic expression.

× No really. However one of my friend believe the meaning of James or sometimes she she starts the meaning of dreams.

✓ No, not really. However, one of my friends believes in the meaning of dreams and sometimes she starts to interpret them.

Multiple issues: punctuation and word choice. 'No really' should be 'No, not really'. 'One of my friend' should be plural 'one of my friends'. Subject-verb agreement: 'friend believes' not 'believe'. 'Believe the meaning of James' is unclear; likely meant 'believes in the meaning of dreams'. 'She she starts' is duplicated and should be 'she starts to interpret them' or 'she interprets them'.

× Maybe it's like a activity for her.

✓ Maybe it's like an activity for her.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before words that start with a vowel sound; 'activity' begins with a vowel sound, so 'an activity' is correct.

× Yes, I want to make my dream come true because the name is encourage me to try something.

✓ Yes, I want to make my dream come true because the name encourages me to try new things.

'The name is encourage me' is ungrammatical. Use third person singular present 'encourages' for the subject 'the name' (if 'name' is intended) and use the base verb 'encourage' rather than 'is encourage'. However 'the name' seems odd; if intended 'that idea' or 'that dream' would be clearer. Also 'try something' is vague; 'try new things' is more natural.

× For example, now I study harder every day because my recently dream is going to the university in Australia.

✓ For example, now I study harder every day because my recent dream is to go to university in Australia.

Use 'recent' rather than 'recently' to modify the noun 'dream'. 'Is going to the university' should be 'is to go to university' to express a goal, or 'is about going to university'. Also omit 'the' before 'university' when speaking generally about attending university in Australia.