Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Говорите более связно и грамматически правильно. Начните с простой темы (например: «Yes, I can remember some of my dreams.»), затем добавьте конкретную деталь и причину. Избегайте непонятных фраз и обеспечьте логическую связь между предложениями. Также используйте прошедшее или настоящее время последовательно и исправьте лексические ошибки (например, «this live my country» → «about my country»; «this so scream» → «it's very frightening»).

Exemplo: Yes, I can remember some of my dreams. Recently I often dream about my country because there is a war there, and the scenes are very frightening. These dreams make me anxious when I wake up.

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ полным и грамматически правильным: начните с прямого утверждения, добавьте причину и пример. Используйте связку для логики (например, «because» или «so») и корректную форму глагола после вспомогательного («I usually talk», не «talking»).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually talk about my dreams with my friends because it helps me process them. For example, last week I told a friend about a stressful dream and we discussed what might have caused it.

Sugestão: Формулируйте идею четко и используйте подходящую лексику. Начните с ответа на вопрос (например, «I don't think so» или «I think sometimes they do»), затем объясните причину с поддерживающей деталью. Избегайте неправильных выражений («what we serve during the day») и замените их на «what we experience during the day» или «what happens during the day».

Exemplo: I don't think dreams always have a special meaning; rather, they are how our brain processes what we experience during the day. For instance, if I study for an exam all day, I sometimes dream about the subject that night.

Sugestão: Отвечайте полно: дайте краткий прямой ответ, затем разъясните причину и приведите пример. Соединяйте предложения связками («but», «because», «for example») и избегайте разрывов в речи. Также используйте более естественные выражения: «good dreams» → «positive goals or hopes», «bad dreams» → «nightmares».

Exemplo: Yes, I would like to make my positive dreams come true, such as achieving a stable life or helping my family. However, I don't want nightmares to come true—for example, if I dream someone has died, I would never want that to happen in reality.

× Yes, my dream, this live my country, because now here a war and this so scream.

✓ Yes, my dream is that my country will be peaceful again because there is a war here now and people are screaming.

The original sentence has multiple structural and grammar issues: missing verb 'is' for nominal clause, wrong word order, and incorrect tense and articles. Use 'my dream is that...' to introduce a clause. Use 'my country will be peaceful again' to express desired future state. Use 'there is a war here now' for 'there be' structure and present situation. 'People are screaming' correctly expresses ongoing action. Suggestions: break into clear clauses, include linking verb, use correct word order and appropriate tense.

× Yes, uh, I usually talking with my friends about my dreams.

✓ Yes, uh, I usually talk with my friends about my dreams.

The auxiliary 'do' is required for simple present affirmative with habitual action, so use base verb 'talk' rather than progressive 'talking' without an auxiliary. 'Usually' indicates a habitual action, which typically uses simple present. Suggestion: use simple present 'I usually talk' or 'I am usually talking' with context and auxiliary.

× Now I think that sleep is just what we serve during the day and our brain processes it all in a dream.

✓ Now I think that sleep is just what we experience during the day and our brain processes it all during dreams.

'We serve during the day' is incorrect verb choice; 'experience' fits. 'Our brain' as singular is acceptable but plural 'brains' or 'our brain' depending on style; better to say 'our brains' or rephrase to 'the brain'. 'In a dream' should be 'during dreams' to generalize. Suggestion: choose verbs that match meaning and keep consistent number (brains) or use 'the brain'.

× Yes it's possible, but only good, not bad ones.

✓ Yes, it's possible, but only for good dreams, not bad ones.

Missing comma after 'Yes' and contraction needs apostrophe which was present but spacing fixed. The phrase 'only good, not bad ones' lacks a clear noun; add 'dreams' to specify. Also 'for' clarifies what is possible. Suggestion: specify the noun and use preposition 'for' to indicate applicability.

× Because in bad dreams I can dream of someone's dead and I wouldn't want it to happen in reality.

✓ Because in bad dreams I can dream that someone is dead, and I wouldn't want that to happen in reality.

'Dream of someone's dead' is ungrammatical: use 'dream that someone is dead' or 'dream about someone's death'. 'Wouldn't want it to happen' needs a clear referent; 'that' clarifies. Also maintain tense consistency: 'I can dream' (present ability) and 'I wouldn't want that to happen' (conditional). Suggestion: use 'dream that' or 'dream about' plus clear noun phrase for the event.