Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and filler words, correct minor grammar (use 'a few' not 'few', 'I saw myself going on a plane' or 'I dreamt I was on a plane'). Use one or two supporting details with linking words (e.g., 'for example' or 'sometimes'), and keep to 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I don't always remember my dreams, but occasionally I recall bits of them. For example, sometimes I wake up remembering a scene where I was on a plane. Usually I can't reconstruct the whole dream, just a few vivid moments.

Sugestão: Be direct and organize your answer: start with a clear statement, then give specific conditions and a reason. Avoid hesitation and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like 'however' or 'because' and provide a concrete example instead of vague adjectives.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes share my dreams, but only when they are interesting or involve someone I know. For example, I once told a friend about a dream we both appeared in because I thought it might mean something to them. I also enjoy listening to other people's dreams because they can be surprising and revealing.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion with a brief explanation and a linking phrase. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I don't think dreams have special meanings' and 'they reflect memories or desires'). Avoid redundant 'uh's and keep sentences coherent.

Exemplo: I don't think dreams have special meanings. In my view, they often reflect memories or personal ambitions rather than predicting the future. For instance, if I dream about exams it usually means I'm feeling anxious about them, not that they'll come true.

Sugestão: Structure the answer: give a clear conditional statement, explain reasons with linking words (e.g., 'if... then...' and 'because'), and end with a concise example. Remove hesitations and complete the example.

Exemplo: It depends on the dream. If the dream is positive or exciting, I would like it to come true because it could bring happiness. However, if a dream is sad or frightening, I wouldn't want it to happen; for example, dreaming about losing a loved one would be upsetting, so I wouldn't wish for that to come true.

× I remember few of the dreams I saw in the night during sleep.

✓ I remember a few of the dreams I had during the night.

Use 'a few' with countable nouns to indicate some; 'few' without 'a' implies almost none. Also 'saw in the night during sleep' is awkward; use 'had during the night' for natural phrasing.

× I cannot recall the full dream in the morning, but I remember few parts of it.

✓ I cannot recall the whole dream in the morning, but I remember a few parts of it.

'Full' is less natural than 'whole' for an entire dream; use 'a few parts' (with 'a') to show some parts are remembered.

× Uh, for example, uh, one day I saw going in a plane.

✓ For example, one day I was going on a plane.

'Saw going in a plane' is ungrammatical. Use past continuous 'was going' to describe the action that was happening. Also use 'on a plane' rather than 'in a plane'.

× Uh, I really share my dreams with others.

✓ I do share my dreams with others.

'Really' is acceptable but placement makes it awkward; 'do share' provides emphasis in natural English. This correction keeps meaning while improving grammatical naturalness.

× Uh, I will only share it if it's something important and interesting and that person is involved in that dream.

✓ I only share them if they are important or interesting and if the other person is involved in the dream.

'Dreams' is plural, so use 'them' and 'they are'. Match pronouns and verbs with plural antecedent; also simplify conjunctions for clarity.

× But I always like to hear about others dreams and what they saw.

✓ But I always like to hear about others' dreams and what they saw.

Use the possessive form 'others'' to show ownership ('others' dreams' is incorrect without apostrophe). Also this keeps tense consistent.

× Sometimes I get to know different, interesting and exciting.

✓ Sometimes I learn about dreams that are different, interesting, and exciting.

Original lacks a noun after the adjectives. Add 'dreams' and use parallel adjective list with commas to complete sentence structure.

× I don't think so.

✓ I don't think so.

No change needed; sentence is correct present tense.

× I believe dreams are just something in our mind, but, uh, hidden inside our deep memory or our ambitions.

✓ I believe dreams are just things in our minds, hidden in our deep memory or related to our ambitions.

Use plural 'things' and 'minds' to match subject 'dreams'. 'Hidden inside our deep memory' is awkward; 'hidden in our memory' is clearer. Add 'related to' before 'our ambitions' for clarity.

× So I don't think they have a special meaning and uh, it's something true really going to happen.

✓ So I don't think they have a special meaning, and I don't think they are really going to come true.

Pronoun reference and verb form were incorrect: 'it's something true really going to happen' is ungrammatical. Use 'they are...going to come true' to refer to 'dreams' and express future probability.

× It depends on the dream.

✓ It depends on the dream.

Sentence is correct; no grammatical change needed.

× If I see something exciting and uh, interesting, I like it to happen.

✓ If I see something exciting and interesting, I would like it to happen.

Use 'would like' to express desire for something hypothetical. Keep adjectives parallel and remove filler.

× But if some if it's something, uh, sad and makes everyone worry, then I don't like to become it true.

✓ But if it is something sad that makes everyone worried, then I don't want it to come true.

Original has redundancy and incorrect verb phrases: 'become it true' is wrong. Use 'come true' for dreams; use 'want' not 'like' for expressing desire about outcomes. Change 'makes everyone worry' to 'makes everyone worried' for adjective form.

× For example, if I if I see something.

✓ For example, if I see something like that, I would not want it to happen.

Original is an incomplete sentence/fragement. Complete the thought by stating what would happen or the speaker's reaction, keeping tense consistent.