Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid minor grammar errors and redundant phrases, and keep it under five sentences. Use a linking word to connect ideas (e.g., 'but' or 'however'), and replace 'forgot' with 'forget' to match present tense. Also shorten the answer slightly to sound more natural.

Exemplo: I sometimes remember my dreams, but usually I forget them shortly after waking up. However, if a dream is particularly vivid, unusual or emotional, I can recall it for a long time.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct topic sentence, then add a linked supporting detail. Use a concise linking word like 'so' or 'and' and avoid repeating 'dream' unnecessarily. It's already natural—just tighten phrasing and keep within the sentence limit.

Exemplo: Occasionally I share my dreams with my husband or close friends, especially when they are funny or interesting. I'm also curious about other people's dreams and enjoy hearing unusual dream stories.

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy and cohesion. Use clearer linking words and correct the final sentence ('Sometimes they're simply a result of what we experienced during the day'). Avoid short fragmented sentences; combine where appropriate to stay under five sentences.

Exemplo: To some extent, yes — I think dreams can reflect our thoughts, emotions and concerns. However, I don't believe every dream has a deep meaning; sometimes they're simply the result of things we experienced during the day.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence and correct minor grammar errors ('continue develop' → 'continue developing' and 'teachings career' → 'teaching career'). Use a linking phrase to connect the example with the general statement. Keep it concise and natural.

Exemplo: Absolutely — by dreams I mean my goals and ambitions. For example, I want to achieve a higher IELTS score and continue developing my teaching career, because I believe that with effort and determination many dreams can become reality.

× Most of the time I forgot the dream shortly after waking up.

✓ Most of the time I forget the dream shortly after waking up.

The context is habitual present, so the simple past 'forgot' is incorrect. Use simple present 'forget' for repeated actions. Suggestion: use 'I usually forget' or 'Most of the time I forget'.

× Sometimes there's simply a result what they are experienced during the day.

✓ Sometimes there's simply a result of what was experienced during the day.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and a wrong verb form. 'a result what they are experienced' is ungrammatical. Use 'a result of' + noun clause. Also maintain past reference 'was experienced' or use 'is experienced' depending on meaning. Suggestion: 'Sometimes a dream is simply the result of what was experienced during the day.'

× By dreams I mean my goals and ambitions in life.

✓ By 'dreams' I mean my goals and ambitions in life.

The sentence is mostly correct but needs punctuation around 'dreams' to clarify meaning; no verb form change required. If treating this as an error type from the list, adding quotes or commas clarifies the noun phrase. Suggestion: write 'By "dreams" I mean...' or use single quotes as shown.

× For example, I would like to achieve a higher IELTS score and continue develop my teachings career.

✓ For example, I would like to achieve a higher IELTS score and continue developing my teaching career.

After 'continue' use the gerund form 'developing', not the base verb. Also 'teachings career' is incorrect; use the adjective 'teaching' to modify 'career'. Suggestion: 'continue developing my teaching career.'