Dreams— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 話し始めに曖昧な「umm」や繰り返しが多いです。直接的な主張（トピック文）を最初に言い、その後で理由を一つか二つの具体例で補足すると流れが自然になります。接続詞（however, because, oftenなど）を使って文をつなぎ、語彙を少し多様にすると印象が良くなります。発話は3文程度にまとめ、冗長な繰り返しを避けてください。

Exemplo: I usually don't remember my dreams. For example, even if I seem to have a vivid dream, I forget the details as soon as I wake up. Because of that, I rarely recall or describe my dreams to others.

Sugestão: 理由と対比をはっきりさせると伝わりやすいです。最初に簡潔な主張を述べ、その後で具体例（例えば誰が、どんな夢を話すか）と結論を続けます。文法上の自然なつなぎ（but, however, because）を使い、語順と時制に注意してください。短いセンテンスで明瞭に表現することを心がけましょう。

Exemplo: I don't usually share my dreams because I forget them quickly. However, I enjoy hearing other people's dreams; for instance, my wife often tells me about the strange dreams she had the previous night.

Sugestão: 意見は示せていますが、話し方が不明瞭で繰り返しが多いです。理由を一つか二つ具体的に述べ、接続詞（for example, because, therefore）で補強してください。語彙は正確に（例えば “predictions” や “scientific basis”）使い、不要な「uh」を減らしましょう。

Exemplo: I don't think dreams have special meanings. Some people believe dreams are predictions, but there is no strong scientific evidence to support that idea, so I remain skeptical.

Sugestão: 意図は明確ですが、同じ語の重複や語順の乱れが見られます。目標を述べた後、具体的な行動（どんな努力をしているか）を一つか二つ挙げると説得力が増します。現在形や進行形を正確に使い、文を2〜3文にまとめてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I plan to study abroad by the end of next year, and I am preparing by researching universities and saving money for tuition and living expenses.

× Umm, I usually don't remember the dream I had.

✓ Umm, I usually don't remember the dreams I have.

The student mixes past ('I had') with a habitual statement indicated by 'usually'. Use the present simple 'have' to match habitual context and plural 'dreams' for general experiences. Suggestion: say 'I usually don't remember the dreams I have.'

× Actually, umm, I do have a dream, but when I get up in the morning I totally forget what is the dream about.

✓ Actually, umm, I do have a dream, but when I get up in the morning I totally forget what the dream is about.

Word order in indirect question should be subject + verb ('the dream is about'), not question form 'what is the dream about'. Also use consistent present tense for habitual action. Suggestion: use indirect question word order: 'I forget what the dream is about.'

× Umm, actually I do not share any dreams with others because I totally forgot what I dreamed of.

✓ Umm, actually I do not share any dreams with others because I totally forget what I dreamed of.

The main clause is present habitual ('I do not share'), so the reason should use present simple 'forget' not past 'forgot'. Keep tense consistent. Also 'dreamed of' is acceptable but 'dreamt about' or 'what I dreamed' are common alternatives.

× But I like to hear others dream like my wife often talk to me what she dreamed last night.

✓ But I like to hear about other people's dreams; for example, my wife often tells me what she dreamed last night.

Multiple issues: 'others dream' needs a noun phrase 'other people's dreams' (possessive). 'My wife often talk to me' has subject-verb agreement error and incorrect verb 'talk to me' for reporting content; use 'my wife often tells me'. Also add a connector and punctuation for clarity. Suggestion: 'I like to hear about other people's dreams; for example, my wife often tells me what she dreamed last night.'

× Hmm, I don't think so. Uh, some people says dream, uh what, what they dream is uh, pre some kind of prediction, but it it has no scientific basis.

✓ Hmm, I don't think so. Uh, some people say that dreams, uh what they dream, are some kind of prediction, but it has no scientific basis.

Subject-verb agreement: 'some people says' should be 'some people say'. Also clarify noun 'dreams' plural to match 'some people', and use 'are' for plural. The phrase was disfluent; reorganize to 'some people say that dreams are some kind of prediction'. Keep 'it has no scientific basis' for singular 'it' referring to the idea, or use 'they have no scientific basis' if referring to dreams.

× Yes I do. I have a fairly clear dream of study abroad by the end of next year and so I make make an effort to make it come true.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a fairly clear dream of studying abroad by the end of next year, so I am making an effort to make it come true.

Use the gerund 'studying' after 'dream of'. Also use present continuous 'I am making an effort' to show ongoing action; remove the duplicated 'make'. Maintain tense consistency for future plan 'by the end of next year'. Suggestion: 'I have a fairly clear dream of studying abroad by the end of next year, so I am making an effort to make it come true.'