Mirrors— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Shorten and organize your answer: start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid filler words (uh, umm) and grammar mistakes (e.g., "that is serves"). Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I look in the mirror every day to check my appearance and choose outfits. Also, I find it calming to take a moment to compose myself before leaving the house.

Sugestão: Be clearer and more specific: use correct tense and simple vocabulary. Explain one clear reason and a brief result, using linking words (so, therefore). Avoid awkward phrases ("lead the mirror").

Exemplo: Yes, I bought a mirror when I was at university because our dorm did not have a full-length mirror. So I ordered one online and it quickly became a shared item that my roommates used every day.

Sugestão: Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing. Start with a direct answer, then give one specific reason and an example. Avoid repetition (always…always) and incorrect tense (wrote).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually carry a small compact mirror when I go out because it is portable and helps me quickly check my makeup or outfit before photos or parties.

Sugestão: Be more natural and specific: give one clear reason and an example of placement or style. Avoid vague or repetitive statements and unnatural phrases ("your own zone"). Use linking words (because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I would. I like hanging a full-length mirror in my bedroom because it makes the room feel bigger and lets me check my outfit. Also, a nicely framed mirror can brighten the space and lift my mood.

× I really like looking at myself in the mirror because I think that is serves as a brilliant way for me to relax my body and awaken my mind.

✓ I really like looking at myself in the mirror because I think that it serves as a brilliant way for me to relax my body and awaken my mind.

The sentence contains an extra verb form 'is' before 'serves', creating a redundancy and incorrect verb sequence. Use either 'is a way' or 'serves as a way'. Correcting to 'it serves' restores proper subject reference and a single main verb. Suggestion: choose one verb structure and ensure verbs are not duplicated.

× And I can check out my outfits from the mirror.

✓ And I can check my outfits in the mirror.

The preposition 'from' is incorrect for indicating where you check your appearance; use 'in' or 'with' the mirror. Also 'check out' is informal; 'check' is sufficient. Suggestion: use 'check my outfits in the mirror.'

× Uh, I will always check it.

✓ Uh, I always check it.

Using 'will always' here is unnatural for habitual actions; the simple present 'always' expresses habitual behavior. Change to 'I always check it.' Suggestion: use simple present for routines.

× Umm, about every day I will use the mirror to check my face.

✓ Umm, I use the mirror to check my face almost every day.

'Will' is inappropriate for habitual actions; simple present expresses routines. Also word order improved: 'almost every day' is more natural than 'about every day'. Suggestion: use simple present for regular actions and place frequency adverb properly.

× When I was in the university, I bought a mirror because I live in the dormitory and all the students or members lead the mirror to check the fashionable outfits.

✓ When I was at university, I bought a mirror because I lived in the dormitory and other students used mirrors to check their fashionable outfits.

Mixed tenses: 'was' and 'bought' are past, so 'live' should be 'lived'. 'Lead the mirror' is incorrect; likely intended 'used mirrors'. Preposition 'in the university' is better as 'at university'. Suggestion: maintain past tense for past events and use correct verbs ('use' -> 'used', 'lead' -> 'used').

× So I brought it online and it's become the essential products for our roommates to use it.

✓ So I bought it online and it became an essential product for my roommates to use.

'Brought' is incorrect for purchasing; use 'bought'. 'It's become' mixes present with past context; use past 'became'. 'Essential products' should be singular 'product' when referring to one mirror. Pronouns: 'our roommates' shifts perspective; use 'my roommates' to match speaker. Also avoid repeating 'it' unnecessarily. Suggestion: use correct verb 'bought', keep tense consistent, match singular/plural nouns and pronouns.

× Definitely, I always take a mirror with myself when I hang out with my friends or go to participate in a party.

✓ Definitely, I always take a mirror with me when I hang out with my friends or go to a party.

Use 'with me' rather than 'with myself'. 'Go to participate in a party' is wordy and unidiomatic; 'go to a party' suffices. Suggestion: use appropriate object pronoun 'me' and simplify verb phrase.

× I will always wrote a little mirror because it's portable and helped me to check out my outfits easily so I really love it.

✓ I always carried a small mirror because it was portable and helped me check my outfits easily, so I really liked it.

Mixed tenses and wrong verb forms: 'will always wrote' is incorrect; for past habitual action use 'always carried' or present habitual 'always carry'. 'Wrote' is wrong verb; 'carry' fits. 'It's' and 'helped' mix present and past; keep consistent. 'Check out' can be 'check'. Suggestion: choose tense consistent with context (past or present) and use correct verb forms ('carry/carrying' not 'write').

× I will always wrote a little mirror because it's portable and helped me to check out my outfits easily so I really love it.

✓ I always carry a small mirror because it's portable and helps me check my outfits easily, so I really love it.

If expressing a current habit, use simple present: 'I always carry'. Replace 'wrote' (incorrect) with 'carry'. Keep present tense for 'helps' and 'love' for consistency. Suggestion: use simple present for routines and correct verb choice.

× Absolutely. I will always use the mirror to decorate my room because I think if you have a mirror in your own zone, you will get a sense of happiness and you will feel inspiring and exciting if you look at the mirror to say you're beautiful or handsome face.

✓ Absolutely. I always use mirrors to decorate my room because I think if you have a mirror in your space, you will feel happy and inspired when you look at your reflection and tell yourself you have a beautiful or handsome face.

'Will always use' is awkward for habitual actions; use simple present 'always use'. 'Own zone' is not idiomatic; 'space' or 'room' is better. 'Get a sense of happiness' can be simplified to 'feel happy'. Use 'inspired' instead of 'feel inspiring' (which would describe the mirror). 'Look at the mirror to say you're beautiful or handsome face' is ungrammatical; correct to 'look at your reflection and tell yourself you have a beautiful or handsome face'. Suggestion: use natural collocations (your space, your reflection), correct adjective/adverb forms, and appropriate verb tenses.