Teacher— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more direct and fluent: give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (verb tense, articles, possessives), avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it under 5 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes. My favourite teacher was my primary school maths teacher, Mr. Banner. He was very clever and kind and always explained difficult concepts patiently. For example, he stayed after class to help me practise fractions, which improved my confidence in maths.

Sugestão: Answer directly with correct grammar and logical linking words. Avoid contradictory phrases (you said both "No" and "still in touch"). Give one concise reason and a brief specific detail. Use simple past or present perfect appropriately.

Exemplo: No, I am not in touch with my primary school teachers. Many of them have retired or moved away, and I now live far from my hometown, so keeping contact is difficult.

Sugestão: Start with a clear topic sentence describing how he helped, then add a specific example and a linking word. Fix grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid unclear phrases like "mathematics strip." Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: He helped me improve my maths by giving extra practice after class. For example, he would give me additional problems and explain different methods, which helped me get better exam results.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer, correct pronouns and verb forms, and provide one clear reason with a linking word. Clarify conflicting statements (studying nursing vs dream job). Limit to 2–3 sentences for clarity.

Exemplo: No, I don't want to be a teacher because it is not my dream job. I hope to become a cabin crew member because I enjoy travelling and meeting new people, although I am currently studying nursing to gain useful skills.

× Yes, I have a favorite teacher in my school time, my maths teacher, his name is his name Mr. Banner and he is very clever and kind hearted man.

✓ Yes, I had a favourite teacher during my school time: my maths teacher, Mr Banner; he was a very clever and kind-hearted man.

Singular/plural and article errors: 'school time' should be 'school time' or 'during my school time'; more naturally 'during my school years'. 'His name is his name Mr. Banner' is a repetition and needs correction. 'kind hearted man' needs the article 'a' and hyphenation 'kind-hearted'. Tense should match past reference to a teacher from school (use 'had' and 'was'). Suggestions: remove repetition, add article before 'man', hyphenate compound adjective, and use past tense for past periods.

× He always teach me and sometimes punish me.

✓ He always taught me and sometimes punished me.

Verb tense and subject-verb agreement require past tense because the student refers to past events; 'teach' and 'punish' should be 'taught' and 'punished'. Also this is subject-verb agreement for past simple. Use past simple for habitual actions in the past.

× No, I still in touch with my primary school teacher because some teachers are died and someone is older and I live in the long distance and I think I can't still touch with my primary school teachers.

✓ No, I am not still in touch with my primary school teachers because some teachers have died, some are very old, and I live far away, so I don't keep in contact with them.

Multiple issues: missing auxiliary verb ('I still in touch' -> 'I am not still in touch'), incorrect verb tense and form ('are died' should be 'have died'), awkward phrases ('someone is older' -> 'some are very old'), incorrect preposition and phrase ('I live in the long distance' -> 'I live far away'), and incorrect verb phrase for contact ('I can't still touch with' -> 'I don't keep in contact with'). Suggestions: use correct auxiliary verbs, present perfect for death that affects present ('have died'), and natural expressions like 'live far away' and 'keep in contact'.

× In what way did your favourite teacher help you? I think my favorite teacher helped me to my improve my mathematics and he always helped me and after classes and he he helped me to build a good mathematics strip.

✓ I think my favourite teacher helped me improve my mathematics; he always helped me after class and he helped me build a good foundation in mathematics.

Errors include incorrect infinitive phrasing ('helped me to my improve' should be 'helped me improve'), repetition and article issues ('after classes' -> 'after class' or 'after classes' depending, but 'after class' is natural), and wrong noun 'mathematics strip' should be 'foundation in mathematics'. Suggestions: use 'helped me improve' (omit 'to'), use singular or plural consistently, and choose the correct noun 'foundation' for skills.

× No, actually we want to be want not to be a teacher in the future because it is not my dream job.

✓ No, actually I do not want to be a teacher in the future because it is not my dream job.

Pronoun and modal/auxiliary errors: 'we want to be want not to be' is confusing; the student should use first person 'I' and a negative form 'do not want'. Use 'do not want to be' for present desire about future plans. Suggest simplifying to 'I do not want to be a teacher'.

× My dream job is become cabin crew, but nowadays I am studying nursing meals and I think my dream job is getting good.

✓ My dream job is to become cabin crew, but nowadays I am studying nursing, and I think my chances of achieving my dream are improving.

Errors: missing 'to' with 'become' ('is become' -> 'is to become'), wrong noun 'nursing meals' should be 'nursing', and awkward phrase 'my dream job is getting good' should be 'my chances of achieving my dream are improving' or 'my prospects are improving'. Use correct infinitive form after 'is' to state a goal, correct course name, and a natural expression for progress.