Science— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды нақты әрі табиғи етіңіз. Тақырыптық сөйлемді қысқа және тік айтқаннан кейін, бір-екі қосымша нақты себептерді логикалық қосылғыштар арқылы айтыңыз. Мысалы, «science is part of our huge world» дегенді нақтылап, қай сала қызықтыратынын немесе неге «magically interesting» екенін түсіндіріңіз. Сонымен қатар, артық «and.» немесе грамматикалық қателерді түзетіңіз.

Exemplo: Yes, I like science because it helps me understand how the world works. For example, I enjoy learning about how plants grow and how electricity powers devices, which makes everyday life more fascinating.

Sugestão: Тік әрі құрылымды жауап беріңіз: нақты уақыт немесе кезең көрсетіңіз (мысалы, primary school). Құрмалас және қайталанатын сөздерден аулақ болыңыз. Неліктен маңызды және қызықты екенін нақты мысалмен түсіндіріңіз. Қысқа, байланысты сөйлемдерді қолданыңыз.

Exemplo: I started learning about science at primary school when we did simple experiments. It felt important because those experiments showed me practical reasons behind everyday phenomena, which was very exciting.

Sugestão: Нақты таңдауды анық айтыңыз (бір немесе екі пән) және қысқаша себеп келтіріңіз. Қайталанатын сөздер мен толғау сөздерін (I guess, kindа, you know) азайтыңыз. Соңында пікіріңізді толық аяқтайтын нақты қорытынды қосыңыз.

Exemplo: I am most interested in biology and physics. At school I found physics difficult, but later I realized its importance in explaining natural laws, while biology fascinates me with how living organisms function.

Sugestão: Жауабыңызды нақты мысалдармен және құрылыммен беріңіз. Эксперименттердің түрі, сіздің рөліңіз және не үйренгеніңізді қысқаша сипаттаңыз. Толғау сөздерінен (uh, umm, I don't know) аулақ болыңыз.

Exemplo: In the lab, I performed experiments like titration to measure concentration and used microscopes to observe plant tissues. These activities helped me improve practical skills and understand chemical and biological processes.

Sugestão: Қысқа және анық жауап беріңіз: иә/жоқ, содан кейін себебін келтіріңіз. «Short shorts» сияқты анық емес тіркестерді алмастырыңыз. Мысал келтіріп, пікіріңізді байланысты сөздер арқылы құрылымдаңыз.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy science programs because they are informative and inspiring. However, many people prefer short, entertaining clips today, so longer educational shows struggle to keep viewers' attention.

Sugestão: Білмеген нәрсені ашық және қысқа айтыңыз, содан кейін болжам немесе жалпы пікір беріңіз. Қайталанатын сөздер мен грамматикалық қателерді түзетіңіз (science is growing, not 'are'). Қолдау үшін нақты факті немесе жалпы тұжырым қосыңыз.

Exemplo: I'm not sure, as I'm not from China, but I think many people visit science museums there. China has invested heavily in science education and museums, so public interest has likely increased.

× Yes, I like science because science is the part of our huge world and.

✓ Yes, I like science because science is a part of our huge world.

The definite article 'the' is incorrectly used before 'part' here; we need the indefinite article 'a' because we refer to one part among many. Use: 'a part of' not 'the part of'. Suggestion: replace 'the part' with 'a part' to be grammatically correct.

× It is very magically interesting thing.

✓ It is a very magical and interesting thing.

'Magically' is an adverb but the sentence needs an adjective to modify 'thing.' Use 'magical' (adjective) and coordinate with 'interesting.' Also include the article 'a' before 'thing.' Suggestion: use 'a very magical and interesting thing' or simply 'very magical and interesting.'

× I think for my school, I'm not that much scientific person, by the way, but I just felt that it's something very important and if you just start setting it, it's just very exciting.

✓ I think at school I was not a very scientific person, but I felt that science is very important, and once you start studying it, it becomes very exciting.

Several issues: wrong preposition 'for my school' should be 'at school'; missing article 'a' before 'very scientific person'; word order and awkward phrases like 'that it's something' and 'start setting it' are incorrect. 'Start setting it' likely intended 'start studying it.' Also tense consistency: refer to past at school. Suggestion: use clear clauses, correct prepositions and articles, and replace 'start setting' with 'start studying'.

× I guess it's biology and physics as well.

✓ I guess biology and physics are interesting to me as well.

Pronoun 'it's' (it is) is vague and doesn't agree with plural subjects 'biology and physics.' Recast sentence to show these subjects are interesting to the speaker. Suggestion: make subject-verb agreement clear and avoid 'it's' for plural subjects.

× When I was a school student, I thought that physics is very tough and never can be manageable by mine by me so.

✓ When I was a school student, I thought that physics was very tough and could never be managed by me.

Tense consistency: past perception should use 'was' not 'is.' Modal and passive phrasing: 'never can be manageable by me' is ungrammatical—use 'could never be managed by me.' Also remove duplicated words. Suggestion: use past tense for past situations and correct modal form 'could never be managed by me.'

× But indeed whenever when I graduated from school I understood that physics is kinda the huge part of.

✓ But after I graduated from school, I realized that physics is actually a huge field.

'Whenever when' is redundant; use 'after' or 'when.' 'Kinda' is informal; use 'actually' or 'rather.' 'The huge part of' is incomplete—of what? Better: 'a huge field' or 'a huge part of science.' Suggestion: remove redundancy, avoid slang, and complete the idea.

× As a biology and chemistry student, we did different types of experiments in, in a lab.

✓ As a biology and chemistry student, I did different types of experiments in a lab.

Pronoun disagreement: 'As a ... student, we' mismatches person. Use 'I' for single student. Also reduce repeated 'in.' Suggestion: ensure subject matches introductory phrase.

× it was, I don't know, like simple titration and observing some tissues through the, uh, microscope.

✓ It was, I don't know, simple titrations and observing tissues through the microscope.

'Like' is unnecessary. Use plural 'titrations' for multiple experiments. 'Through the microscope' is correct; remove extra comma. Suggestion: use correct plural and omit filler words.

× Actually, I find this kind of problems very fascinating, very useful, very informative.

✓ Actually, I find these kinds of programs very fascinating, useful, and informative.

'This kind of problems' mixes singular demonstrative with plural noun; use 'these kinds of programs' or 'this kind of program.' Also 'problems' likely intended 'programs.' Suggestion: match demonstrative and number, and use the correct noun 'programs.'

× But you know, because of short shorts and short videos, many people are not able to focus on this kind of programs anymore.

✓ But you know, because of short clips and short videos, many people are not able to focus on these kinds of programs anymore.

'Short shorts' is confusing; 'short clips' fits. 'This kind of programs' wrong article/number—use 'these kinds of programs.' Suggestion: correct noun choice and match demonstrative/number.

× They need more entertaining even it's not useful, you know?

✓ They need more entertainment even if it's not useful, you know?

Use noun 'entertainment' instead of adjective 'entertaining' after 'need.' Add 'if' to introduce the condition. Suggestion: use 'need more entertainment' and connect clauses with 'if.'

× To be honest, I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese.

✓ To be honest, I'm not sure because I'm not Chinese.

This sentence is correct; no preposition error. Suggestion: no change needed.

× I guess they aren't. Yes, they, they do.

✓ I guess they don't visit often. Yes, they do sometimes.

Original is vague and has repetition. Clarify negative and positive statements: 'they aren't' needs an object—'they aren't sure' etc. Better to say 'they don't visit often' or 'they do visit.' Suggestion: avoid repeated 'they' and be specific.

× Because, you know, nowadays, umm, science are growing up, science are improving in China.

✓ Because, you know, nowadays, science is growing and improving in China.

'Science' is an uncountable singular noun, so use singular verb 'is' not 'are.' 'Growing up' is awkward here; use 'growing' or 'developing.' Suggestion: use singular verb agreement and natural verb collocations.

× A lot of discoveries are being done in China.

✓ A lot of discoveries are being made in China.

Use 'made' rather than 'done' with 'discoveries.' 'Be made' is the common collocation. Suggestion: use 'discoveries are being made' for correct collocation.