Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, correct tense and pronoun use, and limit to 2–4 concise sentences. Use linking words (for example, "sometimes" or "so") and give a specific detail (where you rode it, how often). Avoid filler phrases and repetitions.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I often borrowed my younger brother’s bike and rode it to the local market and small shops near my house. Sometimes I went to the shopping mall on weekends, usually to help buy food or household items for my mother.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion and support it with two specific reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "so"). Correct minor grammar ("people tend to use motorcycles") and avoid repeating words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Not really. I think bikes are uncommon because there are few dedicated bicycle lanes and traffic is dominated by motorcycles, so many people prefer motorbikes for convenience and safety.

× Well I else like to say yes it was not like my own bike but I have borrowed my younger brother 1 and I usually take it to go to the shopping mall at shopping to the shops and like the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom need.

✓ Well, I would like to say yes. It was not my own bike, but I borrowed my younger brother's bike and I usually took it to go to the shopping mall, to shops, and to the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom needed.

Multiple problems: incorrect pronoun/possessive use ('my younger brother 1' should be 'my younger brother's bike') so classify as incorrect use of pronouns. Also tense consistency and verb forms needed adjusting (see separate entries). Suggestion: use possessive 'brother's' for ownership and ensure verbs match past narrative. Note: Other grammar issues in this sentence are addressed in separate corrections below.

× Well I else like to say yes it was not like my own bike but I have borrowed my younger brother 1 and I usually take it to go to the shopping mall at shopping to the shops and like the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom need.

✓ Well, I would like to say yes.

Original 'Well I else like to say yes' is ungrammatical. The intended modal phrase is 'would like to say', which expresses a polite statement. Use 'would' + base verb. 'Else' is incorrect here and should be omitted.

× Well I else like to say yes it was not like my own bike but I have borrowed my younger brother 1 and I usually take it to go to the shopping mall at shopping to the shops and like the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom need.

✓ It was not my own bike, but I borrowed my younger brother's bike.

The original sentence runs several clauses together without proper punctuation or structure. Break into clearer sentences and use simple past when recounting childhood events. 'I have borrowed' is present perfect and conflicts with past context; use simple past 'I borrowed'.

× Well I else like to say yes it was not like my own bike but I have borrowed my younger brother 1 and I usually take it to go to the shopping mall at shopping to the shops and like the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom need.

✓ I usually took it to go to the shopping mall, to shops, and to the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom needed.

Narration of past habits requires past tense. 'I usually take' should be 'I usually took' and 'my mom need' should be 'my mom needed'. Use past simple for repeated past actions and past simple for the verb 'need' in that context.

× I usually take it to go to the shopping mall at shopping to the shops and like the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom need.

✓ I usually took it to the shopping mall, to shops, and to the markets near my house to buy the food that my mom needed.

Redundant and incorrect preposition 'to go to the shopping mall at shopping' is awkward. Use 'to the shopping mall' or 'to shops' without extra 'go to'. Keep parallel structure with repeated 'to' before each destination.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country? Well, I would like to say not really. Uh, since my country didn't have those dedicated lanes for bicycles and people usually tend to be for motorcycle more so it hasn't been too popular yet yet.

✓ Well, I would say not really. Since my country doesn't have dedicated bicycle lanes and people tend to prefer motorcycles, cycling hasn't become very popular yet.

Pronoun/phrase issues and word choice: 'people usually tend to be for motorcycle more' is incorrect; use 'people tend to prefer motorcycles'. Also adjust tense and contraction: 'didn't have' conflicts with general present situation; use present simple 'doesn't have'. Remove duplicate 'yet'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and natural collocations.