Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be concise and correct tense and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and fix mistakes like "I do" for past and "I've learned something" which is vague — say what you learned. For example, use past tense to describe childhood and mention when/how you learned later.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bicycle as a child; it was a birthday present. However, I was too afraid of falling to learn to ride when I was young. Later, my daughter taught me to balance and pedal properly, so now I can ride confidently.

Sugestão: Organise your answer: give a direct topic sentence, then two specific reasons with linking words. Fix grammar (plural forms and relative clauses) and use precise vocabulary like "bike-sharing" or "bike lanes." Avoid repetitive phrasing such as "So it is popular."

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For one thing, widespread bike-sharing schemes make bicycles easy to rent, especially in cities. Moreover, cycling is cheap and convenient, and dedicated bike lanes have made it safe for people of all ages, including children and older adults.

× Yes I do.

✓ Yes, I did.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child), so the student should use past tense. Using 'do' is present tense and mismatches the time frame. Change to 'did' to match the past context.

× I it was one of my birthday presents but I've never learned it because I was too scared to lose balance and fall off.

✓ It was one of my birthday presents, but I never learned to ride it because I was too scared of losing my balance and falling off.

The original sentence has an extra pronoun 'I' and mixes tenses and verb forms awkwardly. Remove the stray 'I', change 'I've never learned it' to past simple 'I never learned to ride it' to match 'was', and use the gerund forms 'losing' and 'falling' after 'scared of' for correct collocation. Also add commas for clarity.

× However, I've learned something now and I'm not afraid anymore because my daughter taught me.

✓ However, I learned something recently and I'm not afraid anymore because my daughter taught me.

The student used present perfect 'I've learned' with 'now' which is awkward; in a finished past action 'taught me' indicates past, so past simple 'I learned' or 'I have learned recently' would fit. Using 'recently' or 'now' consistently is important. Here 'learned' matches the past teaching event and keeps tense consistency.

× Yes, I think it's popular because I always see a lot of public bikes around the road for people who doesn't have a bike but wants to ride the bike around place to place.

✓ Yes, I think they're popular because I always see a lot of public bikes along the roads for people who don't have a bike but want to ride from place to place.

There are several issues: 'it's' should agree with plural 'bikes' so use 'they're'; 'around the road' is unnatural—use 'along the roads'; subject-verb agreement 'doesn't' should be 'don't' to match plural 'people'; 'wants' should be 'want'; 'ride the bike around place to place' is unidiomatic—use 'ride from place to place'.

× And it is also very convenient and cheap so it's suitable for children or adults or even for old people.

✓ They are also very convenient and cheap, so they're suitable for children, adults, and elderly people.

Maintain plural agreement 'they are' for 'bikes'; 'old people' is less natural and can be replaced with 'elderly people' or 'older people'; use commas in a list and consistent plural nouns. Also matching 'they're' keeps pronoun agreement.

× So it is popular.

✓ So, they are popular.

The pronoun should agree with the plural noun 'bikes', so use 'they are' instead of 'it is'. Adding a comma improves flow.