Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on correct tense and concise, natural phrasing. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, give one or two specific supporting details, and avoid redundant phrases and filler words. Also correct inaccuracies (e.g., “convenient family” is unclear) and use linking words like 'because' or 'so' properly.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike as a child. My family was quite conservative, and girls were not allowed to ride bikes, so I never learned to cycle. As a result, I usually walked or took public transport to school.

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and add specific examples or reasons. Use varied vocabulary (e.g., 'commonly used', 'commute') and linking words ('because', 'for example', 'therefore') to improve coherence. Avoid filler words ('like') and finish sentences completely.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my city because they are cheap and easy to park. For example, many people cycle to work or the market every day, especially in congested areas. Therefore, bikes are often preferred over cars for short trips.

× No, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

The sentence mixes present simple 'don't have' with a past time expression 'when I was a child'. Use simple past 'didn't have' to match the past context. Suggestion: use past tense for actions or states in the past (I didn't have).

× Actually, I did not experience having a bike in my childhood because I belong to a very like convenient family in which the girls are not allowed to have a bike.

✓ Actually, I did not have a bike in my childhood because I belonged to a fairly conservative family in which girls were not allowed to have bikes.

Multiple issues: 'did not experience having a bike' is awkward; use 'did not have a bike'. 'I belong' is present tense but the context is past, so use 'I belonged'. 'a very like convenient family' is ungrammatical and likely meant 'fairly conservative family' or similar; choose appropriate adjective. 'the girls are not allowed' should be past passive 'girls were not allowed'. Also pluralize 'bikes'. Suggestion: keep verb tenses consistent in past and choose clear adjectives.

× So yeah, I don't have a bike when I was a child.

✓ So yeah, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Same as the first sentence: present simple 'don't have' conflicts with the past time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past simple 'didn't have'. Keep tense consistent.

× Yes, bikes are so popular in our city.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in our city.

'Are' is correct for present tense here, but 'so popular' is informal and may be acceptable; change to 'very popular' for clearer standard usage. Tense is present to describe a current general fact, which is appropriate.

× Most of the people use it for like daily uses or to travel from one place to another.

✓ Most people use them for daily purposes or to travel from one place to another.

'Most of the people' is wordy; 'Most people' is more natural. 'Use it' is incorrect because 'bikes' is plural; use 'them'. 'Daily uses' is awkward; 'daily purposes' or 'daily use' is better. Maintain plural agreement between subject and pronoun.

× This is like the daily use of it in my country or in my city right now.

✓ That is the common daily use of bikes in my city at the moment.

Sentence is wordy and ungrammatical: 'This is like the daily use of it' is awkward. Use 'That is the common daily use of bikes' or 'That is how bikes are commonly used in my city right now.' Keep clarity and concise structure and ensure pronoun reference matches plural 'bikes'.

× So yeah, instead of using cars, most of the people choose bikes to travel because they are more convenient to use and.

✓ So yeah, instead of using cars, most people choose bikes to travel because they are more convenient to use.

Remove trailing 'and.' 'Most of the people' is better as 'most people'. Sentence is otherwise acceptable; ensure it ends properly. Also 'choose bikes to travel' could be 'choose bikes for travel' or 'choose to travel by bike.' Ensure clarity and fluid ending.