Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be clear and grammatically correct: start with a direct statement, then add 1–2 specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and small words like "uh" or repeated words. Use past tense consistently when talking about childhood. For example, say who gave the bike, why it was important, and one memory (where or how often you rode).

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child. My uncle gave it to me as a prize when I won a school race, so it was very special to me. I rode it every day around my neighborhood and practised cycling skills after school.

Sugestão: Answer directly and organize reasons with linking words. Use plural and article forms correctly, and give a specific example or statistic if possible. Keep answers concise (max 5 sentences). For instance, state that many families own bikes, explain reasons (cheap, healthy, convenient), and give a brief example of who rides and where.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. Many families own one or two bicycles because they are inexpensive and good for short trips. For example, children often ride to school and adults use bikes for exercise or to visit nearby markets.

× Yes, well, I have a bike when I was a child, this bike for me one first prize.

✓ Yes, well, I had a bike when I was a child; this bike was my first prize.

The sentence mixes present tense 'have' with past time 'when I was a child'. Use past tense 'had' for possession in the past. Also use past passive 'was' to show the bike was awarded to the student as a prize. Use a semicolon or separate sentences to join two related clauses for clarity.

× This this this bike give me my uncle I I like this bag.

✓ This bike was given to me by my uncle; I liked it a lot.

Pronoun and word repetition should be removed. The original uses incorrect word order 'give me my uncle' and missing past tense. Use passive 'was given to me' or active 'my uncle gave it to me'. Also 'I like this bag' is likely incorrect noun; 'I liked it a lot' clarifies emotion about the bike. Ensure pronoun 'it' correctly refers to 'bike'.

× I ride every day and train with this with this bike.

✓ I rode it every day and trained with this bike.

The context is childhood (past), so use past simple 'rode' and 'trained'. Remove duplicated 'with this'. Ensure consistent past tense across the sentence.

× Uh, yes, uh, I think bikes are popular in my country because, uh, because one family, our one family have one bike or two bike, uh, children and uh, boys, girls ride everyday bike in my country and train with this every year.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because most families have one or two bikes. Children, both boys and girls, ride bikes every day and train with them every year.

This sentence mixes singular/plural and tense issues. Use 'most families have' (plural) instead of 'our one family have'. Use plural 'bikes' after numbers. Use 'ride bikes every day' instead of 'ride everyday bike'. Replace 'train with this every year' with 'train with them every year' to use correct plural pronoun. Maintain present tense for a general statement. Improves word order and removes filler words.