Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be grammatically accurate, concise, and add a clear topic sentence plus one or two specific supporting details. Use past simple for past events, correct articles, and link ideas with a short connector. Keep it under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a large bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about seven, and I remember feeling proud and free whenever I rode to the park. Because my parents couldn’t always drive me, the bike was my main way to get around the neighborhood.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear opinion, use consistent tense, and explain reasons with specific examples. Avoid vague phrases and finish your thought. Use linking words (however, because, therefore) to connect ideas and keep to three sentences if possible.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are still fairly popular in my country, but they are less common than in the past. Nowadays many people prefer motorbikes or cars, so bicycles are often used for exercise or as leisure items rather than daily transport. However, in some cities cycling is growing again because it is cheap and good for the environment.

× When I was a child, I have a one big bike.

✓ When I was a child, I had a big bike.

The sentence refers to a past time ('When I was a child'), so the verb should be in the simple past tense. 'Have' is present tense; use 'had'. Also 'a one big bike' is ungrammatical: use the article 'a' with the adjective order 'big bike' and remove 'one'. Suggestion: use 'I had a big bike.'

× I still remember how to ride it and then the feeling is very good.

✓ I still remember how I rode it, and the feeling was very good.

The memory refers to a past event, so verbs should be in the past tense: 'rode' and 'was'. Also 'how to ride it' is an infinitive and less natural when describing a past memory — use 'how I rode it.' Connect ideas with a comma and use past tense for consistency.

× Yes it is, but if it is not as popular as before, now when people ride a bike, they are more or less like riding the luxury bike.

✓ Yes, they are, but bikes are not as popular as before; nowadays when people ride a bike, they tend to ride more luxurious bikes.

The reply to 'Do you think bikes are popular' should use 'they' (plural) to match 'bikes' (subject-verb agreement). The original mixes tenses and awkward phrasing 'more or less like riding the luxury bike.' Use 'nowadays' for present time and 'tend to ride more luxurious bikes' to express tendency. Also pluralize 'bike' to 'bikes' to match context.

× In the old days there's not much motorcycle and cars, so people.

✓ In the old days there weren't many motorcycles and cars, so people used bikes more often.

The original is a sentence fragment and mixes present contraction 'there's' with past context. Use 'there weren't' for past negative and plural nouns 'motorcycles and cars' require 'many' not 'much'. Complete the idea by explaining consequence: 'so people used bikes more often.' This corrects tense, quantifier, pluralization, and sentence completeness.