Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar (use past tense consistently), make the answer more concise and structured with a clear topic sentence and one or two supporting details. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "and", "but", "because"). Be specific: mention age, where you rode, and one brief feeling or result. Keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it with my father when I was about seven, and he patiently taught me how to balance and pedal. At first I was scared of falling and scraping my knees, but after a few weeks I became confident and rode around our neighborhood every day.

Sugestão: Clarify meaning and correct vocabulary and grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence stating whether bikes are popular, then give 1–2 specific reasons or examples (e.g., bike lanes, bike-sharing services, commuting). Avoid unclear phrases like "used by president" and use linking words ("because", "for example").

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient for short trips. For example, many cities have bike-sharing schemes and dedicated bike lanes, so people often cycle to work or to buy groceries.

× I do have a bike when I was a child and I usually ride the bike with my father and he's also the person who teach me, who taught me how to ride a bike.

✓ I had a bike when I was a child and I usually rode the bike with my father, and he was the person who taught me how to ride a bike.

Tense consistency error: the sentence mixes present tense ('do have', 'usually ride', 'he's') with past-time reference 'when I was a child'. Use past tense for actions in childhood: 'had', 'rode', 'was', 'taught'. Also remove the redundant clause 'who teach me' and keep 'who taught me'. Use past simple for completed past actions.

× And at first I was scared of falling down or hurt my knees, so I have a fear in my heart, but.

✓ At first I was scared of falling down or hurting my knees, so I had a fear in my heart.

Verb form error and tense inconsistency: after 'scared of' the verb should be in -ing form ('hurting') not base form 'hurt'. Also the time is past so use past tense 'had' rather than present 'have'. Remove trailing 'but' that leaves the sentence incomplete.

× Yes, my country bike is very convenient and there are some sharing bike on a street, which is usually used by president, which is used by people in our country and they use it to transport.

✓ Yes, bikes in my country are very convenient, and there are some shared bikes on the streets, which are usually used by people in our country for transport.

Several number and noun form errors: 'my country bike' is incorrect; use 'bikes in my country' or 'transport in my country'. 'Some sharing bike' should be plural and use correct adjective form 'shared bikes'. 'On a street' should be plural 'on the streets' or 'in the streets'. 'President' is likely wrong context; removed. Use plural agreement: 'which are usually used by people' and 'for transport' to express purpose.