Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetition (e.g., "umm") and fix tense or possessive errors. For example, combine ideas: mention color, where you rode it, and a brief anecdote using a linking word like "so" or "because."

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a blue bike, and I often rode it around my neighborhood. Because my friend liked it so much, his father bought him the same model, so we could ride together.

Sugestão: Give a full sentence that directly answers the question, then support it with a specific reason or example. Use linking words like "because" or "for example" to make your reply coherent. Avoid one-word or fragment answers.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for exercise and commuting. For example, cycling clubs and bike lanes have become more common in cities, especially among sports enthusiasts.

× I love riding the bike around my neighborhood.

✓ I loved riding the bike around my neighborhood.

The examiner asked about the student's childhood (past). The sentence uses present tense 'love' which conflicts with the past time frame; change to past tense 'loved' to maintain consistent past narration. Suggestion: when describing past experiences, use past tense verbs throughout.

× I had a friend that loved my bike and because of that, umm, the father had to the father bought the same bike for him also and.

✓ I had a friend who loved my bike, and because of that his father bought the same bike for him too.

Problems: incorrect relative pronoun ('that' is acceptable but 'who' is preferred for people), repeated phrase 'the father had to the father' and awkward ending 'and.' Also 'also' at end is unnatural; use 'too' or place 'also' before the verb. The corrected sentence removes repetition, uses 'who' for a person, changes possessive 'his father' for clarity, and places 'too' correctly. Suggestion: avoid repeating words, use 'who' for people, and position adverbs like 'too' after the verb or at the end for natural flow.

× Especially those that love sports.

✓ Yes, bikes are especially popular among people who love sports.

The original fragment lacks a clear subject and verb and does not directly answer the question. It is a sentence fragment. The correction supplies a full sentence that answers the examiner's question, uses 'among' with 'people who love sports' and keeps tense and meaning appropriate. Suggestion: ensure answers are complete sentences with subject and verb and directly address the question.