Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t have a bike as a child.”), then briefly explain the reason using correct tense and clearer wording. Use one or two linking words (for example, “because” or “so”) and avoid unnecessary repetition. Also correct grammar (articles, verb forms) and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents decided to wait until I was older, and they promised to buy me one as a gift for my 18th birthday because they wanted me to be more responsible first.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give specific supporting details with clear linking words. Correct pronouns and repetition, and use appropriate vocabulary (e.g. “motorbikes” or “scooters”, “crowded streets”, “affordable”). Provide one or two concrete reasons or examples. Keep sentences grammatical and within the length limit.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in India. Because they are affordable and good for navigating crowded streets, many people use motorbikes and scooters for daily travel. For example, students and delivery drivers often choose bikes since they are cheap to run and easy to park.

× No, I didn't have bike when I was telling because my parents were distracted and if they were very disciplined they told me when you got 18 plus then I will give you a bike as a gift on your 18th birthday.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because my parents were distracted, and if they had been very disciplined they would have told me 'when you turn 18, I will give you a bike as a gift on your 18th birthday.'

The sentence misses the indefinite article 'a' before 'bike' (article error). 'When I was telling' is incorrect and should be 'when I was a child' or similar (sentence structure/context). The conditional refers to a past unreal situation and needs the third conditional: 'if they had been... they would have told me' (verb tense/structure). 'When you got 18 plus' is incorrect phrasing; use 'when you turn 18' or 'on your 18th birthday'. Combine clauses with proper punctuation and use reported speech only if appropriate. Suggestion: use 'a bike', correct past unreal conditional structure, and clearer time expression.

× Yes bikes are very popular in your country. I live in in India.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. I live in India.

The pronoun 'your' is incorrect because the student is speaking about their own country; it should be 'my' (incorrect use of pronouns). Also duplicate 'in in' is a typographical error; remove the extra 'in'. Add commas and articles as needed.

× In India the bikes were very popular then Bike with bike go in anyway in small small sites.

✓ In India, bikes are very popular; they go everywhere, even in very narrow places.

The original uses past tense 'were' which conflicts with the general present truth; use present simple 'are' for general statements (present tense issue). The phrase 'Bike with bike go in anyway in small small sites' is ungrammatical and unclear (sentence structure errors), so rephrase to 'they go everywhere, even in very narrow places.' Use plural agreement 'bikes' with 'are'.

× Also that car cannot be cool then when bikers go.

✓ Also, cars cannot be as convenient when bikers are on the road.

The phrase 'cannot be cool then when bikers go' is unclear and uses 'cool' incorrectly to compare practicality; this is an incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs. Rephrase to express intended meaning: contrast cars and bikes in terms of convenience or ease of movement. Use comparative structure 'cannot be as convenient' and correct verb form 'bikers are on the road.'