Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details (who bought it, what you liked doing), avoid fillers (uh, umm) and repetitions. Keep it to 2–4 sentences and use linking words (for example, because, so) if you add reasons or examples.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child; my aunt bought it for me as a birthday present. I rode it to school and around the neighborhood almost every day, which helped me become more confident and active.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then give specific reasons and use linking words. Begin with a clear opinion (Yes or No), then support it with 1–2 concrete points (e.g., bike-sharing schemes, health trends, infrastructure). Avoid hesitation words and correct vocabulary ("bikes", "bike-sharing"). Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country. For example, bike-sharing programs have spread in many cities, and improved cycle lanes make it convenient for both adults and children to commute by bike.

× When I was young, uh, I had a bike and it was bought by my auntie, umm, when I was young, uh, I'm, I'm very, I like biking very much, yeah.

✓ When I was young, I had a bike that my auntie bought for me. I liked biking very much.

The original contains awkward tense and redundancy. 'It was bought by my auntie' is passive but fits; however, a clearer past-tense active form is 'my auntie bought for me.' The sentence also mixes present ('I'm, I'm very, I like') with past context; because the question asks about childhood, use past tense 'I liked.' Remove filler words and repetition for clarity and fluency. Suggestion: keep consistent past tense when speaking about childhood and use active voice for simplicity.

× For me, I would say uh bite are popular in my country umm nowadays umm share bicycle was a development and many adults and children umm they will likely to bike.

✓ For me, I would say bikes are popular in my country nowadays. Shared bicycles have developed, and many adults and children are likely to ride bikes.

Multiple grammar issues: 'bite' is a misspelling of 'bike' and singular/plural mismatch; use 'bikes are' for plural subject-verb agreement. 'Share bicycle was a development' is incorrect: use plural 'shared bicycles have developed' or 'shared bicycle services have developed' with present perfect to show recent development. 'They will likely to bike' mixes modal and infinitive incorrectly; use 'are likely to ride bikes' or 'will likely ride bikes.' Also use 'ride' instead of colloquial 'bike' as a verb is acceptable but 'ride bikes' is clearer. Ensure consistent plurality and correct verb forms.