Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and mostly natural, but it's slightly repetitive and could be more concise and structured. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Avoid repeating words (e.g., “used it”) and correct small grammar issues (e.g., omit redundant “back” or say “when I was a child” once).

Exemplo: Yes — I had a bike when I was a child. For example, I often rode it to my friend’s house, and sometimes I practised simple tricks in the park, which helped me gain confidence and balance.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but contains unclear wording, repetition, and grammatical errors. Begin with a clear opinion, then give two specific reasons with linking words (for example, “because” and “also”). Use plural agreement (bikes are, kids are) and remove filler phrases. Be specific about what makes them popular (e.g., convenience, leisure, environment).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. Firstly, many young people enjoy riding in bike parks and practising tricks, which makes cycling a trendy hobby; secondly, bikes are a convenient and eco-friendly way to travel short distances in busy cities.

× Yes, I had a bike back when I was a child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The original sentence is mostly correct but uses redundant phrase 'back when' which is informal and unnecessary. Use simple past 'had' to match the past-time question. Suggestion: remove 'back' for conciseness.

× I used it to go to my friend's house and also I used it sometimes to play some bike tricks.

✓ I used it to go to my friend's house, and I also used it sometimes to do bike tricks.

The verb phrase 'play some bike tricks' is unnatural; English typically uses 'do' with 'tricks.' This is a word choice/verb form issue: use base verb 'do' after 'to' (infinitive) or use present participle consistently in other constructions. Suggestion: use 'to do bike tricks' and add a comma and 'also' placement for clarity.

× Yes, I think UMM bikes are popular in my country because some kids are very fond of it, using it in a bike parks and do some some tricks and also it is an efficient way of using it as a traveling partner when you want to go anywhere and it is.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country because some kids are very fond of them; they use them in bike parks and do tricks. Also, bicycles are an efficient means of transport when you want to go anywhere.

Multiple issues: incorrect pronoun agreement ('it' referring to plural 'bikes' should be 'them'); article and noun number ('a bike parks' is wrong; use 'bike parks' or 'a bike park'); repetition and redundancy ('do some some tricks', 'and it is' repeated). Also awkward phrase 'traveling partner' and 'way of using it as a traveling partner.' Corrections: use plural pronouns 'them', restructure sentences into two clear sentences, use 'do tricks' and 'means of transport' for natural phrasing. Suggestions: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents, avoid repetition, and simplify complex phrases.