Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: You should give a clear topic sentence, correct grammar, and coherent supporting details. Keep answers natural and concise (max 4–5 sentences). For this response: 1) Correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., “bought by my father” → “my father bought it” or “given by my father”); 2) Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., “because,” “so,” “which”); 3) Be specific about why you enjoyed it (examples: freedom, games, independence); 4) Avoid redundancy and awkward phrases. Aim for a short, direct first sentence and then 1–2 supporting sentences with specifics.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike when I was a child — it was a second-hand bicycle my father bought from a garage. I loved it because it gave me freedom to explore the neighborhood and play with my friends, and I rode it almost every day after school. Because it was small and light, I could easily handle it and felt proud to own it.

Sugestão: This answer needs a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary, and coherent supporting details. Start with a direct opinion (“Yes, bikes are popular”) then explain reasons using linking words (e.g., “because,” “as a result,” “therefore”). Correct word choice: use “bikes” not “bugs”; use complete sentences and provide specific reasons (health, cost, social distancing, transport shortages). Provide one or two concrete examples or trends and avoid fragmented phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes became more popular in my country, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic. Many people chose cycling because it was cheaper than public transport and allowed social distancing, and bike sales and cycling routes increased in many cities as a result.

× When I was a child, I had one bike that balked by my father, but actually it's a second hand bike that he bought in a garage.

✓ When I was a child, I had one bike that was bought by my father, but actually it was a second-hand bike that he bought at a garage.

The original uses 'balked' which is incorrect; the correct past participle of 'buy' is 'bought' and passive voice requires 'was bought'. Also 'it's' (present) should match past context 'it was'. Use 'second-hand' as a compound adjective and 'at a garage' as the correct preposition. Suggestion: Replace 'balked' with 'was bought', change 'it's' to 'it was', hyphenate 'second-hand' and use 'at' for the place.

× I really enjoy with that bike because when I was a child bike it's like something that very dominant by the children.

✓ I really enjoyed that bike because when I was a child, a bike was something that most children valued.

'Enjoy with' is incorrect; the verb 'enjoy' is transitive and does not take 'with' in this context. Tenses should be consistent: past context requires 'enjoyed'. The phrase 'very dominant by the children' is ungrammatical; likely intended meaning is that bikes were popular or valued by children, so use 'something that most children valued'. Also ensure article usage: 'a bike' and comma after the time clause. Suggestion: Use 'enjoyed' without 'with', rephrase 'very dominant by the children' to 'something that most children valued'.

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This sentence is grammatically correct. 'Bikes' (plural) matches the plural verb 'are'. No change needed.

× Bugs are the thing that very popular in my country especially when happen the COVID-19 pandemic.

✓ Bikes became very popular in my country, especially during the COVID-19 pandemic.

The original uses 'Bugs' (likely a typo for 'Bikes') and has word order and tense issues. 'Are the thing that very popular' is ungrammatical; correct phrasing is 'became very popular'. Use 'during' for events like a pandemic and ensure past tense 'became' because the pandemic is a past event in context. Suggestion: Correct 'Bugs' to 'Bikes', use 'became very popular', and 'during the COVID-19 pandemic'.

× Why it popular in my country? Because of the pandemic most of people in my country. Change become a people who very.

✓ Why were they popular in my country? Because of the pandemic, many people in my country changed to using them more.

The question form requires inversion: 'Why were they popular...' rather than 'Why it popular...'. The clause 'Because of the pandemic most of people in my country.' is incomplete and needs a verb and correct quantifier: use 'many people'. The fragment 'Change become a people who very.' is ungrammatical; intended meaning is that people changed behavior, so 'many people ... changed to using them more' is clear and grammatical. Maintain past tense to match context. Suggestion: Use correct question inversion, include a verb in the because-clause, use 'many people' for quantification, and express behavior change clearly as 'changed to using them more'.