Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and organise your answer with a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details. Use linking words (for example, "because" or "so") and avoid repeating phrases. Also correct verb forms and article usage (e.g., "the doctor recommended" not "doctor says recommended").

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike as a child. The doctor recommended cycling because I had a leg problem, so my parents bought one to help with my rehabilitation.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then support with clear, logical reasons. Avoid contradicting statements and fix factual inaccuracies (bikes do not cause air pollution; motor vehicles do). Use linking words like "however" or "because" to connect ideas and make comparisons concise.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are becoming more popular in my country because many people prefer them for short trips and to avoid traffic. However, motor vehicles still cause most air pollution, so promoting cycling could improve air quality and public health.

× Yes, when I was a child I used to have a bike. Uh, when I was a child I had a problem with my legs and doctor says recommended to me that riding a bike helps with my problem, helps to my problems and my parents bought me a bike.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I used to have a bike. When I was a child I had a problem with my legs and the doctor recommended to me that riding a bike would help with my problem, so my parents bought me a bike.

Multiple tense and article issues: 'doctor says recommended' mixes present and past and misorders verbs; use simple past 'recommended' for a past action. 'would help' is appropriate to report the doctor’s suggestion about a likely benefit (modal reported in past). 'helps' should be changed to 'would help' to match reported speech and past context. 'helps to my problems' is ungrammatical; use 'help with my problem'. Add the definite article 'the' before 'doctor' when referring to a specific doctor. Combine clauses for clarity by using 'so' to show consequence. Suggestions: keep verbs in past tense for past events, use 'the doctor', and use 'help with' rather than 'helps to'.

× I would say that most people are trying to ride the bikes, uh, rather than using their own vehicles, but because it it's harmful for the air, it can pollute and be dangerous for residents.

✓ I would say that most people try to ride bikes rather than use their own vehicles, but because it can be harmful to the air, it can pollute and be dangerous for residents.

'are trying to ride the bikes' suggests an ongoing action; use simple present 'try' for general habits. Article 'the' before 'bikes' is unnecessary when speaking about bikes in general; use 'ride bikes'. 'using their own vehicles' should be parallel with 'ride bikes', so use 'use their own vehicles'. 'because it it's harmful for the air' has an extra 'it' and wrong preposition; remove the repeated 'it' and use 'harmful to the air' not 'for the air'. Also clarify subject: 'it can pollute' refers to vehicles or emissions; keep 'it' but ensure clarity. Suggestions: use simple present for general statements, maintain parallel structure, remove redundant words, and use 'harmful to'.