Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence (past tense), use correct tense and word order, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Add one or two specific details with linking words to make the answer more natural and within five sentences. For example, mention when you got it, who gave it, and why you liked it.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I got it from my parents for my eighth birthday, and it was a small, bright red bike with training wheels. I loved it because it felt very fast and gave me more freedom to ride around my neighborhood. As a result, I spent many afternoons practicing and exploring nearby parks.

Sugestão: Give a direct opinion, use correct vocabulary and complete sentences, and support your view with specific reasons and linking words. Avoid filler words and incomplete phrases. Mention examples of transport alternatives and clarify why distances or infrastructure affect bike popularity.

Exemplo: I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because distances between places are often long and cities lack safe bike lanes. For example, many people prefer cars or public buses for commuting to work or school. Moreover, in rural areas the roads are not suitable for cycling, so bikes are mainly used for short trips or recreation rather than daily transport.

× Yes, I have a bike ram river, a choice when 8 age.

✓ Yes, I had a bike by the river; I got it when I was eight years old.

The student is speaking about the past, so the present tense 'have' is incorrect; use past tense 'had' (tense issue, ID 5). Also pronoun and noun ordering and missing words cause confusion: 'ram river' likely 'by the river' and 'a choice when 8 age' should be 'I got it when I was eight years old'. Use 'was' with age expressions and write numbers as words in speech context. Suggestion: use 'I had' for past possession and 'I was eight years old' for age.

× My parents also like boats a bike for me and that bike is very cool and it's very small, but it is very wonderful it's.

✓ My parents also bought a bike for me; that bike was very cool and very small, but it was wonderful.

Several errors: incorrect verb 'like boats' likely intended 'bought' (word choice not in list but corrected to past tense 'bought') and tense should be past 'bought' and 'was' because events happened in the past (Past tense issue, ID 5). Pronoun/possessive confusion and repetition 'it's' at end is unnecessary. Suggestion: use a clear past-tense verb for completed actions and keep consistent past tense for descriptions ('was very cool', 'was very small').

× I don't think bias are very popular in my country 'cause my country is very big and it is very far away from home to the school or to the animal, uh, buildings.

✓ I don't think bikes are very popular in my country because it is very big and the schools and other buildings are far from many homes.

'bias' is a spelling error for 'bikes' (not in list but corrected). The structure 'it is very far away from home to the school' is ungrammatical: use 'schools are far from homes' or 'homes are far from schools'. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect plural agreement/word choice. Also replace informal 'cause' with 'because' in formal speech. Suggestion: say 'bikes are not very popular because schools and other places are far from many homes' to convey meaning clearly.

× We also use the.

✓ We also use cars or public transport.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object or verb complement, making it a sentence without a verb phrase (Sentence structure error, ID 26 and possibly 23). Provide a complete sentence that answers the question, for example 'We also use cars or public transport.' Suggestion: always include the object of 'use' and finish the sentence to convey the idea.