BikePart 1 Relatório

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Part 1

Examinador

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Candidato

No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child.

Examinador

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Candidato

Uh, no. I don't think bikes are very popular, but when I was a child my friends had bikes and I borrowed borrowed them from them.

Avaliação

Total

Total: 6.0Fluência e coerência: 6.0Pronúncia: 6.0Gramática: 6.0Recurso lexical: 6.0

Part 1

Did you have a bike when you were a child?

Pontuação: 70.0

Sugestão: Сделайте ответ более естественным и расширьте его кратким объяснением, используя связку. Избегайте односложных ответов; добавьте тему и одну-две поддерживающие фразы (не более 5 предложений).

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child, but I often borrowed my friends’ bikes to ride around the neighborhood. I remember enjoying short rides to the park on weekends because there weren’t many bike paths near my home.

Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

Pontuação: 65.0

Sugestão: Уберите междометия и повторения, дайте более структурированный ответ с причинами и примером. Используйте связку (например, "because" или "however") и конкретный пример, чтобы показать глубину мысли. Не более 4–5 предложений.

Exemplo: I don’t think bikes are very popular in my country because most people prefer cars or public transport for convenience. However, when I was a child many of my friends owned bikes, and I used to borrow theirs to ride to the local park or school on weekends.

Gramática

Verb in the past participle form

× I borrowed borrowed them from them.

I borrowed them from my friends.

The sentence repeats 'borrowed' twice, which is a repetition error rather than a verb form error; also 'from them' is redundant after naming 'my friends'. Use a single past simple verb 'borrowed' to match the past context and a clear object 'my friends'. Suggestion: remove the duplicate word and clarify the object: 'I borrowed them from my friends.'

Vocabulário

PopularWell-liked; Nonspecialist; Widespread; Mass
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