Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (e.g., use 'child' instead of 'minor person', 'ride' instead of 'drive'), avoid repetition, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep it to no more than five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes — I had a bike from about the age of five. It was my favourite toy, and I used to ride it every day around the neighbourhood. Because I practised a lot, I eventually learned to ride it on longer routes to visit friends and the park.

Sugestão: Provide a clear opinion in one sentence, then add a specific reason or example using a linking word. Use correct pronouns and simple grammar (e.g., 'I', 'I sold it', 'not many people use bikes for commuting'). Avoid unclear phrases and unnecessary repetition.

Exemplo: Bikes are not very popular for daily travel in my country. For example, many people prefer cars or public transport because distances can be long and cycling infrastructure is limited.

× Yes, I had one when I was about 5 years old.

✓ Yes, I had one when I was about 5 years old.

This sentence is already correct in past tense; no change needed.

× It was my favorite toy as as minor person and love to cycle it every day and go out every every moment.

✓ It was my favorite toy when I was a child, and I loved riding it every day and going out all the time.

Errors: repeated words ('as as', 'every every'), incorrect phrase 'minor person', verb tense and form ('love' should be past 'loved'; 'cycle it' is unnatural). Suggestion: Use 'when I was a child' for clarity, use past tense 'loved' to match 'was', and use gerunds 'riding' and 'going' for activities.

× I can drive it and go further.

✓ I could ride it and go farther.

Problems: tense and verb choice. The student is describing childhood ability, so past modal 'could' is appropriate (Grammar Problem Type ID 5 also could apply), and 'ride' is the correct verb for bicycles rather than 'drive'. 'Farther' is preferable for physical distance. Suggestion: Use 'could' for past ability and 'ride' for bicycles.

× In my own country, bikes are less used in daily routine life.

✓ In my country, bikes are less commonly used in daily life.

Problems: awkward phrasing 'less used in daily routine life'. Use 'less commonly used' or 'not commonly used' and 'daily life' is the natural collocation. Keep present simple for general statements.

× Me as a person as adult, I don't use it every moment or I had one when I was a child but now I have said it to another person.

✓ As an adult, I don't use a bike every day. I had one when I was a child, but now I gave it to another person.

Problems: incorrect subject form 'Me' instead of 'I' and awkward phrasing. Tense inconsistency and wrong verb 'said' instead of 'gave'. Suggestion: Use 'As an adult, I don't use a bike every day' for present habit and 'I gave it to another person' to indicate past transfer.

× In this moment person didn't ever.

✓ At the moment, that person does not have it anymore.

Problems: ungrammatical phrase 'In this moment person didn't ever.' Needs clear subject and correct tense. If referring to the person who received the bike, use present simple 'does not have it anymore' or 'no longer has it'. Suggestion: Use 'At the moment' for current time and 'does not have it anymore' for clarity.