Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct, use correct past tense, avoid repetition and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then give one or two brief supporting reasons using linking words (e.g., "because", "so"). Also correct grammar: use "didn't" instead of "don't", "couldn't" or "was too small" for ability/size, and "couldn't afford" for financial reasons.

Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I was too small to ride one safely, and my family couldn't afford to buy one at the time.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, use plural and articles correctly, and add a specific reason or example. Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example", "so") to connect ideas and provide one concrete example or comparison to support the claim.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. For example, many students and office workers ride bicycles to college or work to avoid traffic and save money on transport.

× No, I don't have a bike when I when I wear a child because I am too small when I was too small to have a bike and my father don't afford at that time so I don't have a bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was too small to have one, and my father couldn't afford it at that time.

Multiple tense and verb form errors: the question asks about the past, so use past tense (didn't have, was a child, was too small). 'Don't' is present tense and should be 'couldn't' to express inability in the past. 'Wear a child' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'be a child' or 'when I was a child'. 'Afford' needs an auxiliary and proper tense ('couldn't afford it'). Also replace repeated 'I don't have a bike' with the past form and use 'one' or 'it' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: identify the time reference (past) and match all verbs to past tense, use appropriate auxiliaries for ability/permission (couldn't) and correct collocations (be a child).

× Yes, bikes are often popular in my country because nowadays, uh, young people are mainly using bike uh, so that uh, they can go to their colleges, offices and in every places they want.

✓ Yes, bikes are very popular in my country because nowadays young people mainly use bikes to go to college, work, and other places they want.

Tense and verb form issues and plural agreement: 'are often popular' is awkward; 'are very popular' or 'are popular' is natural. 'Young people are mainly using bike' mixes continuous present with incorrect singular 'bike'—use simple present 'mainly use' for habitual actions and plural 'bikes'. 'Colleges, offices and in every places' has preposition and plural problems; use 'to college, work, and other places' or 'to their colleges, offices, and other places'. Remove filler sounds (uh). Suggestion: use simple present for habits, ensure nouns agree in number, and use correct prepositions ('to').