Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise and organized. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fillers (um, uh) and repetition.

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bicycle when I was a child. My father taught me how to ride and how to stand up again if I fell, which made the whole experience fun and confidence-building.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer then support it with specific reasons and clear linking words. Correct grammatical structures (e.g., 'there are many public bicycles' or 'bike-sharing programs') and avoid vague phrases like 'a lot of like'.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because there are many public bike-sharing schemes and dedicated bike lanes. For example, people often use shared bicycles for short commutes and errands, especially in cities.

× Yes absolutely I have a bike and my my dad teach me how to ride a bike and umm how to good at stand up when I umm fall in the street so it was fun memory for me.

✓ Yes, absolutely. I had a bike and my dad taught me how to ride it and how to get back up when I fell in the street, so it was a fun memory for me.

The response refers to childhood (past), so verbs must be in past tense. 'have' should be 'had' to match past time. 'teach' should be 'taught' (past tense irregular). 'fall' should be 'fell' (past tense). 'how to good at stand up' is ungrammatical: replace with 'how to get back up' for natural past action. Also adds minor punctuation and a pronoun ('it') to avoid repetition. Suggestion: identify time markers (when you were a child) and consistently use past-tense verbs; use correct irregular past forms (teach → taught, fall → fell).

× Yeah, I'd say yes, 'cause in my country we have a lot of like public bicycle in the road and also a lot of people to use them.

✓ Yeah, I'd say yes, because in my country we have a lot of public bicycles on the roads and many people use them.

Countable nouns need correct plural forms and quantifiers. 'public bicycle' should be plural 'public bicycles'. 'a lot of people to use them' is incorrect structure; use 'many people use them' or 'a lot of people use them'. Preposition 'in the road' should be 'on the roads'. Suggestion: use plural for countable items and pair 'a lot of' with plural nouns or replace with 'many'; use appropriate prepositions for location ('on the road(s)').

× And I saw every, I saw most people to use.

✓ And I saw most people using them.

The phrase is ungrammatical: 'I saw every, I saw most people to use' mixes quantifiers and incorrect infinitive use. Use 'most people' (quantifier) with the -ing form 'using' after 'saw' when describing observed actions. Suggestion: after verbs like 'see', use either bare infinitive for a complete action ('I saw him ride') or present participle for an ongoing action ('I saw people using'); remove redundant 'every'.