Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammatical accuracy, reduce hesitations and fillers, and organize into a clear two-part answer: a direct topic sentence plus 1–2 supporting details with linking words. Correct tense (use past for childhood), fix articles and pronouns, and remove repeated fillers (umm, uh). Be concise (max 5 sentences) and give specific detail about why it was comfortable.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My father gave me a very colorful bike with pink, yellow, green, blue, red and black stripes, and it was comfortable because the padded seat was wide and sprung, so long rides didn’t hurt my back.

Sugestão: Use correct grammar (plural/singular and tenses), avoid unnecessary hesitations, and add one clear reason with a linking word. Replace vague words like “communicate” with precise vocabulary such as “commute.” Provide a concise comparison or trend statement using linking words (e.g., however, because, recently).

Exemplo: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country. They were common about 20 years ago, but they have become popular again recently because many people now use cycling to commute around the city due to traffic and high fuel prices.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The question asks about possession in the past ('when you were a child'), so the verb should be in the past tense. Use 'had' (past simple) rather than 'have' (present simple). Suggestion: match verb tense to the time reference in the question.

× It was gift from my dad and it was umm a very colorful bike and very comfortable.

✓ It was a gift from my dad, and it was a very colorful and comfortable bike.

Missing article 'a' before 'gift' and awkward coordination. Also combine adjectives in a more natural order and include the article before 'gift'. Suggestion: include necessary articles and use commas or conjunctions to join related clauses smoothly.

× Uh have a lot of colors like uh pink, yellow, green, blue, uh red and black.

✓ It had a lot of colors, like pink, yellow, green, blue, red and black.

Subject and verb are missing and tense should be past to match context ('had' not 'have'). Add 'It' as subject and 'had' as past tense verb. Also remove filler words for clarity.

× It was very comfortable because uh the seat it was.

✓ It was very comfortable because the seat was comfortable.

Redundant and ungrammatical word order ('the seat it was'). Rephrase to a clear clause with subject 'the seat' and verb 'was'. You can also say 'because the seat was comfortable' or 'because of the comfortable seat.'

× Yes, bicycle are quite popular in my country.

✓ Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country.

Countable noun 'bicycle' needs plural 'bicycles' when referring generally. Also plural agreement with verb 'are' is correct; change noun to plural. Suggestion: use plural for general statements about many items.

× Uh, there were uh common about 20 years ago and uh have become popular again recently because many people now uh, cycling to uh, uh, to communicate around the city.

✓ They were common about 20 years ago and have become popular again recently because many people now cycle to commute around the city.

Multiple problems: pronoun choice ('they' refers to 'bicycles'), tense consistency (use present perfect 'have become' is fine but subject must match), incorrect verb form 'cycling' should be base verb 'cycle' after 'people now', and wrong verb 'communicate' used instead of 'commute'. Also 'there were common' is wrong; use 'They were common.' Suggestion: use correct pronouns, verb forms, and verbs that match intended meaning ('commute' not 'communicate').