Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more grammatically accurate, concise, and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence in past tense, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., don’t say ‘in our country’ twice) and correct verb tenses and article use (use ‘had’ not ‘don’t have’, and ‘an electric vehicle’ not ‘electrical vehicle’).

Exemplo: I didn’t have a motorbike when I was a child because it was illegal to ride one before turning 18. However, I did have a bicycle and I used it to go to school and visit friends, which helped me stay active.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct opinion sentence, then add one or two specific reasons with linking words. Improve grammar (use ‘two-wheelers’, ‘four-wheelers’, and correct article use) and avoid unclear phrases like ‘India like country’. Be concise and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people prefer two-wheelers because they are cheaper and easier to park, and they can navigate heavy traffic more quickly in densely populated cities.

× No, I don't have any bike when I was a child because in our country it is not legal to have a motorcycle or electrical vehicle before 18 years old because we didn't get our driving license then.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because in our country it was not legal to have a motorcycle or electric vehicle before 18 years old since we had not yet gotten our driving license.

The sentence mixes present tense ('don't have', 'is not') with past time reference ('when I was a child'). Use past tense to match the past context. Also 'any bike' is unnatural here; use 'a bike'. 'Electrical vehicle' should be 'electric vehicle'. Use 'had not yet gotten' or 'had not yet received' for past perfect to show the license was not obtained at that time. Suggestion: Keep all verbs in the past when describing past situations: 'didn't have', 'was not legal', 'had not yet gotten'. Use 'a bike' and 'electric vehicle' for correct noun and adjective forms.

× So I just have bicycle when I was a child.

✓ So I just had a bicycle when I was a child.

The verb 'have' is in the present tense but the clause refers to childhood, so it should be past tense 'had'. Also include the article 'a' before 'bicycle'. Suggestion: Use 'had' for possession in the past and include the indefinite article: 'had a bicycle'.

× Yes I completely agree with this question that bikes are popular in our country because most of the people used to travel by two Wheelers and they don't want to have 4 Wheelers due to traffic.

✓ Yes, I completely agree that bikes are popular in our country because most people used to travel by two-wheelers and do not want four-wheelers due to traffic.

'Most of the people' is wordy; 'most people' is preferred. 'Used to travel by two Wheelers' should be 'used to travel by two-wheelers' (hyphen and lowercase). 'They don't want to have 4 Wheelers' is awkward; use 'do not want four-wheelers'. Ensure subject-verb agreement and consistent number and style: 'do not' matches plural 'most people'. Suggestion: Use 'most people' and consistent plural verbs and proper noun formatting: 'used to travel by two-wheelers' and 'do not want four-wheelers'.

× And in India like country very populous country it's a very populous country so more.

✓ And in a country like India, which is very populous, bikes are even more common.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and repetitive ('very populous country' repeated) and lacks connectors. Use 'a country like India' and a relative clause 'which is very populous' to clarify. Then state the result: 'bikes are even more common'. Suggestion: Rephrase to avoid repetition and fix sentence structure: 'In a country like India, which is very populous, bikes are even more common.'