Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Javobni grammatik jihatdan toʻgʻrilash va javobni aniqroq, tartibli qilish ustida ishlang. Masalan, otinishlarda va fe’llarda yagona/ko‘plik va vaqt mosligini tuzatish kerak ("When I were" → "When I was"). Jumladan, takrorlanishni kamaytiring va ortiqcha toʻxtashlar (uh)dan qoching. Savolga to‘g‘ri boshlovchi gap bilan javob bering (topic sentence), so‘ngra qisqacha sabab yoki tafsilot bilan davom ettiring. Iltimos, javobni 2–4 jumla bilan va aniq bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, because, so) foydalanib tuzing.

Exemplo: When I was a child I had several bikes because my father worked in a bicycle shop. My favourite was a Chinese-made model which was very sturdy and easy to ride. I remember using it every weekend to explore our neighbourhood, and I felt very proud of it.

Sugestão: Javobni aniq va mantiqan tuzishni mashq qiling. Vaqt ifodalari va murakkab jumlalarni toʻgʻri ishlating ("since 10 years" → "for the last ten years"; "I were" → "I was"). Takrorlanish va keraksiz to‘xtatishlardan saqlaning. Javobni boshlang‘ich fikr (topic sentence), sabab yoki misol bilan kengaytirish va yakunlovchi gap bilan tugating. Bog‘lovchi so‘zlardan (for example, because, last year) foydalaning.

Exemplo: Yes, I believe bicycles have become more popular in my country over the last ten years. For example, there are annual cycling competitions and many people now use bikes for short trips. Last year I attended an impressive race in Tashkent, which showed how many people enjoy cycling.

× When I were a child, I had some kind of bike because when I were a child, my dad worked at a bicycle shop.

✓ When I was a child, I had some kind of bike because my dad worked at a bicycle shop.

You used 'were' with the singular subject 'I'. In simple past, the correct form is 'was' for I/he/she/it. Also the repeated clause is redundant; remove duplicate. Suggestion: use 'I was' for past-tense statements about yourself and avoid repeating identical clauses.

× That's why I had some, uh, kind of bikes.

✓ That's why I had some kind of bike.

'Kind of' followed by a noun typically uses singular when referring to the general type ('kind of bike'). Using 'some' with plural 'bikes' plus 'kind of' is awkward. Use either 'some bikes' or 'some kind of bike'. Suggestion: choose one: 'some bikes' (plural) or 'some kind of bike' (singular).

× But uh, I like the most one of them.

✓ But, uh, I liked the most one of them.

The phrase is ungrammatical in several ways. In context of past preference, use past tense 'liked'. To express preference about one item, say 'I liked one of them the most' or 'my favorite was one of them'. Suggestion: use 'I liked one of them the most' for clear meaning.

× It is a made in it is, it was made in China and it was so amazing.

✓ It was made in China, and it was amazing.

The original sentence repeats fragments and misuses the article 'a' with passive 'made'. Correct passive past is 'was made in China'. Remove repetition and say 'it was amazing' instead of 'so amazing' if you want neutral tone; 'so amazing' is acceptable colloquially. Suggestion: keep concise: 'It was made in China and was amazing.'

× Yes, I think because in my country bikes are so famous about since 10 years, because every year we have a competition about riding a bike.

✓ Yes, I think so because in my country bikes have been very popular for the last 10 years, and every year we have a bicycle-riding competition.

You mixed present simple with 'since 10 years' which requires perfect aspect. Use present perfect continuous or present perfect: 'have been popular for the last 10 years'. 'Famous about' is incorrect; use 'popular' or 'well-known'. Also 'competition about riding a bike' is awkward; use 'a bicycle-riding competition' or 'a cycling competition'. Suggestion: use 'have been popular for the last 10 years' to express a situation that started in the past and continues now.

× If I'm not mistaken, last year I had, I had been there also in Tashkent.

✓ If I'm not mistaken, last year I was also in Tashkent.

You used 'had been' incorrectly; 'had been' is past perfect and requires a reference to an earlier past event. Simple past 'was' is correct for a specific time 'last year'. Also 'I had, I had been there' is redundant. Suggestion: say 'last year I was also in Tashkent.'

× There was a so amazing competition and I were.

✓ There was an amazing competition and I was there.

'Competition' is singular and correctly takes 'was', but the phrase 'a so amazing' is ungrammatical; use 'such an amazing' or 'so amazing'. Use 'an' before a vowel sound: 'an amazing competition'. Also 'I were' is incorrect; the correct past form is 'I was'. Suggestion: 'There was such an amazing competition and I was there.'