Part 1
Examinador
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Candidato
I don't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have a sense of balance and always fell down from a bike.
Examinador
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Candidato
Not exactly. Actually we prefer the electronic bikes than the bikes in nowadays. One reason is that the electronic 1 is more rapid and useful.
Did you have a bike when you were a child?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要用正确的时态和更自然的表达,并且尽量简洁。可以先直接回答(肯定或否定),然后用一到两句具体原因或细节支持。注意时态:描述过去经历应使用过去式,避免冗长或重复。
Exemplo: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. I couldn't ride because I lacked balance and often fell, so my parents decided to wait until I was older.
Do you think bikes are popular in your country?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 句子应更流畅并使用恰当比较结构,避免语法错误和口语化数字代替词。先给一个直接回答,再用一到两句具体原因支持,使用连接词使逻辑更清晰。
Exemplo: Not really. Nowadays many people prefer electric bikes to regular bicycles because they are faster and more convenient for commuting, especially in crowded cities.
× I don't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have a sense of balance and always fell down from a bike.
✓ I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I didn't have a sense of balance and always fell off a bike.
问题类型:现在时/过去时混用(应使用过去时)。句子中“I don't have a bike when I was a child”将现在时和过去时混用,应全部用过去时表述过去的情况,因此改为“I didn't have a bike when I was a child”。另外,固定搭配是“fall off a bike”而不是“fall down from a bike”。建议:描述过去经历时,整句使用过去时;使用正确短语“fall off”。
× Not exactly. Actually we prefer the electronic bikes than the bikes in nowadays. One reason is that the electronic 1 is more rapid and useful.
✓ Not exactly. Actually we prefer electric bikes to regular bikes nowadays. One reason is that electric ones are faster and more useful.
问题类型:比较结构和形容词使用错误。英语中表示比较应使用prefer ... to ... ,不能用 prefer ... than。此外,“the electronic bikes”用词不自然,建议用“electric bikes”;“in nowadays”是错误搭配,应为“nowadays”单独使用;“the electronic 1”疑为打字错误且“rapid”用于速度可理解但不常用,应改为“faster”。最后单复数要一致,用“ones”代替“1”。建议:使用固定搭配“prefer A to B”;用“electric bikes”与“regular bikes”对比;使用“nowadays”;形容词用“faster”更自然。