Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be direct and clear. Start with a correct tense and a topic sentence that answers the question, then add one or two brief supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words. Also use past tense for childhood and give a specific detail (e.g. who gave it to you, its colour, or a memory).

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was six, and I used to ride it every day around the neighbourhood.

Sugestão: Give a clear opinion first, then support it with specific reasons or examples. Use linking words (for example, because, in the past, now) to make your answer coherent. Avoid hesitations and vague phrases; mention a clear time frame and concrete facts (e.g. types of bikes, who uses them, or how usage has changed).

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, in the past many people used simple commuter bicycles for daily travel, especially in small towns, because they were cheap and easy to maintain; now, however, more people also use motorbikes and cars in cities.

× Yes I do. I was I I was a child.

✓ Yes, I did. I was a child.

The examiner asked about the past (when you were a child). The student used present tense 'do' which is incorrect for a past situation. Use past tense auxiliary 'did' for 'Did you have...?' and a simple past statement 'I was a child.' Remove repeated words and add commas for clarity. Suggestion: Match the question tense (past). Say 'Yes, I did.' and then 'I was a child.'.

× Uh, yes, uh, the bike in our country is very popular.

✓ Uh, yes, bikes in our country are very popular.

The student uses singular 'the bike' with 'is' when speaking generally about bikes in the country. For general statements about all bikes, use plural subject 'bikes' with plural verb 'are' to agree. Also omit unnecessary article 'the' unless referring to a specific bike. Suggestion: Use plural noun and verb: 'Bikes in our country are very popular.'.

× This is like, uh, in the old days that we are talking about uh, is bazaars city 100 is very popular that, uh, every Indians was using this and uh.

✓ In the past, especially in bazaars and cities, bicycles were very popular; many Indians used them.

The original sentence is disfluent and ungrammatical. Problems include incorrect word order, unnecessary filler words, incorrect plurality ('every Indians'), and wrong verb tense/agreement ('was using'). For past generality, use plural nouns and past simple: 'bicycles were' and 'many Indians used them.' Replace 'every Indians' with 'many Indians' or 'every Indian' (singular). Remove filler words and clarify 'bazaars and cities.' Suggestion: Keep sentences concise and use correct plural forms and past tense: 'In the past, especially in bazaars and cities, bicycles were very popular; many Indians used them.'.