Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and tense consistency, be concise, and add one clear supporting detail. Start with a direct topic sentence in past tense, use connecting words for clarity, and avoid repetition. For example, use one or two sentences: state you had a bike, say who you rode with, and give a brief specific detail about when or where you rode.

Exemplo: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I often rode it with my brother and friends around our neighborhood in the evenings after school, which was my favorite way to relax and meet people.

Sugestão: Avoid double negatives and unnecessary words (like a name). Answer directly, use correct grammar, and provide a reason with a linking word. Keep it to one or two sentences and use specific details (e.g., car ownership, public transport, infrastructure).

Exemplo: No, I don't think bicycles are very popular in my country because most people prefer driving their own cars to commute, and city planning favors cars over cycling with few bike lanes.

× Yes, I do. I often ride a bike when I was young with my brother and my friends. I ride a bicycle around my town mostly like when evening time after school.

✓ Yes, I did. I often rode a bike when I was young with my brother and my friends. I rode a bicycle around my town mostly in the evenings after school.

Errors: The student mixed present tense (do/ride) with past time reference (when I was young). Use past tense for past habits. Also 'when evening time after school' is awkward; use 'in the evenings after school.' Suggestions: Use 'did' for the short answer about a past situation; use 'rode' for repeated past actions; use 'in the evenings' for habitual time expressions.

× Now Sadie, I don't think bikes are popular no longer in my country because many people use their own vehicle drive to work most of the time.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular anymore in my country because many people drive their own vehicles to work most of the time.

Errors: 'no longer' combined with 'don't think' creates awkward double negation and incorrect placement; 'use their own vehicle drive' is incorrect word order and noun/verb forms. Use 'anymore' after negative, or 'no longer' in affirmative construction (e.g. 'bikes are no longer popular'). Also 'drive their own vehicles' is correct verb + object order and plural agreement. Suggestions: Say 'No, I don't think bikes are popular anymore' or 'Bikes are no longer popular.' Use 'drive their own vehicles' for clarity and correct verb/noun forms.