Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond to the question. Start with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two specific supporting details. Keep it natural and concise (no more than 3–4 sentences). Use correct tense (past) and avoid irrelevant phrases.

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle that my parents bought for me when I was seven. I rode it to visit friends in my neighborhood every afternoon, which helped me become more confident and independent.

Sugestão: Your response is vague, grammatically incorrect, and repetitive. Begin with a clear statement (Yes/No + brief reason), then give 1–2 specific supporting details or examples using linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use appropriate subject-verb agreement and avoid filler words.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in cities you can see commuters cycling to work, and in rural areas families often use bicycles for shopping and errands.

× Guess I have room now. Lola brought it for me.

✓ I guess I had one when I was a child. Lola bought it for me.

The original sentence has tense and sentence structure problems. The question asks about having a bike when the student was a child, so past tense should be used. 'Guess I have room now.' is unrelated and incorrect in context; replace with 'I guess I had one when I was a child.' Also 'brought it for me' is incorrect choice of verb for acquisition in past tense; use 'bought it for me.' Suggestion: use past simple for past events and choose verbs that match meaning (have -> had; bring -> buy).

× Yes it does, meaning people showed advice and many kind of vibe with the other people.

✓ Yes, they are. People share advice and many kinds of experiences with each other.

The response uses 'Yes it does' which is wrong because the question refers to 'bikes are popular' (plural subject), so reply should agree with plural: 'Yes, they are.' 'Showed advice' is incorrect verb choice and tense; use 'share advice.' 'Many kind of vibe' has plural and noun form errors: 'many kinds of experiences' or 'many kinds of vibes' and preposition 'with the other people' should be 'with each other.' Suggestion: match subject and verb number, choose appropriate verbs, pluralize count nouns and use correct prepositions.

× Umm, they are so happy to use it.

✓ Umm, they are very happy to use them.

Pronoun reference and number do not agree. 'They' is plural and should refer to 'bikes' (plural), so the object pronoun should be 'them,' not 'it.' Also use 'very' rather than 'so' for more formal clarity if desired. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their antecedents.

× So like they are uh, enjoying using that bike.

✓ So, they enjoy using those bikes.

The original is wordy and mixes tenses and demonstratives incorrectly. The simple present 'they enjoy' fits general statements about people. Use plural demonstrative 'those bikes' to match plural subject. Remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: keep general statements in simple present and ensure demonstratives agree in number.