Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, clarity and coherence. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms and possessives, and combine ideas with linking words. Add one specific detail to support your statement and keep to 2–4 sentences. For example, correct plural/singular forms (“parents believed”), use “so” or “therefore” to link ideas, and replace vague phrase “to vehicle” with a clearer phrase like “by car” or “by motorbike.”

Exemplo: I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My parents believed riding a bike was too dangerous for young children, so they always drove me to school by car. As a result, I never learned how to cycle until I was older.

Sugestão: Make the response more natural and grammatical, use linking words to structure it, and provide a specific reason or example. Correct awkward phrases (e.g. “I think in my country,” “easier to ride a bike,” “when there is traffic”). Keep to 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary like “popular,” “convenient,” “congested.”

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because they are cheap and convenient. When there is heavy traffic, bikes can weave through congestion and save time. For instance, many commuters prefer scooters or bicycles for short trips in the city.

× My parents believes when a kid rides a bike you can sustain injury.

✓ My parents believe that when a kid rides a bike, they can get injured.

ID 27: Subject-verb agreement error. The plural subject 'parents' requires the base verb 'believe', not the singular 'believes'. Also improved sentence flow by adding 'that', adding a comma, and changing 'you can sustain injury' to the more natural 'they can get injured' to match the indefinite subject 'a kid'. Suggestion: make the verb agree with the subject number and keep pronouns consistent (use 'they' for a generic singular person).

× The reason why we commute to school to vehicle.

✓ The reason is that we commute to school by vehicle.

ID 26: Sentence structure error. The original lacks a main verb and uses incorrect preposition 'to vehicle'. Correct structure uses 'The reason is that' plus the correct preposition 'by' for means of transport. Suggestion: include a linking verb and use 'by' to indicate the method of commuting.

× Yes, I think myself applying my country because it's very easier to board a bike and when there are traffic, bikes can easily pass through traffic without getting stopped, unlike cars that has four tires.

✓ Yes, I think so in my country because it's much easier to ride a bike, and when there is traffic, bikes can easily pass through without getting stopped, unlike cars that have four tires.

ID 12: Incorrect use of pronouns and related issues. 'I think myself applying my country' is ungrammatical; 'I think so in my country' or 'I think that in my country' is clearer. Also corrected other errors: 'very easier' is incorrect degree (use 'much easier'), 'board a bike' should be 'ride a bike', 'there are traffic' should be 'there is traffic' (traffic is uncountable), and 'cars that has' needs subject-verb agreement 'cars that have'. Suggestion: use appropriate pronouns and fixed expressions ('I think so', 'in my country'), correct verb collocations ('ride a bike'), and ensure agreement with uncountable nouns and plural verbs.