Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Structure your answer with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct tense (past) and avoid repetition. Be concise (no more than 3–4 short sentences). Improve vocabulary for clarity (e.g., convenient, easy to park, ride to school).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a bike when I was a child and I used it to ride to school because it was fast and convenient. Also, it was easy to park and saved money on transport, so I rode it almost every day.

Sugestão: Begin with a direct opinion sentence, then give clear, specific reasons with linking words (for example, because, so, therefore). Use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., many people, commute, avoid traffic). Keep it concise and coherent.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many people use them to commute to work and school. For example, in the mornings a lot of commuters ride bikes to avoid traffic and save on transport costs.

× Yes, I have a bike here when I was a child because I think the child where if I have a bike is really convenient to ride to the school and I think it's easier to park somewhere I can go.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child because I thought that having a bike made it really convenient to ride to school, and it was easier to park it wherever I went.

The student mixes present and past tenses ('have' with 'when I was a child'). Use past tense 'had' and 'thought' to match the time frame. The phrase 'the child where if I have a bike' is ungrammatical and should be replaced with 'I thought that having a bike'. Also 'ride to the school' should be 'ride to school' and 'park somewhere I can go' should be 'park it wherever I went' to reflect past context and clarity. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same past time frame and use clear noun clauses (that + gerund) for opinions.

× That's why I think the bike is more convenient than I have a bike around with a child.

✓ That's why I thought a bike was more convenient for a child to have.

The original sentence has confusing structure and mixed tenses ('think' with past context) plus word order issues ('more convenient than I have a bike around with a child' is meaningless). Change to past tense 'thought' and restructure to 'a bike was more convenient for a child to have' for clear comparison and correct syntax. Suggestion: identify the subject ('a bike') and the beneficiary ('a child') and place them in a natural English order.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country.

✓ Yes, I think bicycles are popular in my country.

This sentence is mostly correct but 'bikes' is casual; 'bicycles' is more formal. No tense change needed because the question asks for a current opinion. Suggestion: use consistent vocabulary; otherwise the sentence is acceptable.

× I think it is the two were using the bikes every day in the morning which usually ride the bike to the complain because I it is more convenient to know the traffic, not the traffic it has to.

✓ I think many people use bikes every morning; they usually ride to work or school because it is more convenient given the traffic.

The original is highly ungrammatical and contains unclear phrases ('the two were using', 'ride the bike to the complain', 'more convenient to know the traffic'). Correct by specifying 'many people use bikes every morning' and common destinations 'work or school'. Use 'because it is more convenient given the traffic' to express that bikes help avoid traffic issues. Suggestion: simplify ideas into short clauses: subject (many people), verb (use), frequency (every morning), reason (more convenient because of traffic).