Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, like), combine related ideas, and add one specific detail to make the answer vivid. Keep to no more than 3–4 sentences and use linking words to connect ideas (for example, “so” or “and”).

Exemplo: Yes. I had a bike from about age 12, and I used to ride it to the park near my house with my friends. We would often race along the promenade and stop for ice cream, so those rides were some of my happiest childhood memories.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first, then support it with specific examples and correct vocabulary. Remove hesitations and filler sounds, and use linking words (for example, “for example,” “for instance,” “also”). Be specific about where and why people ride bikes. Keep to 2–3 clear sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country. For example, many people ride bicycles along the Corniche and on public beachfront paths, and cycling events and family outings on weekends are common.

× I was like 12.

✓ I was about 12 years old.

The original is colloquial and incomplete for formal grammar; 'was like 12' is informal and vague. Use 'was about 12 years old' to state age in the past clearly and grammatically.

× I used it to ride.

✓ I used it to ride around.

The phrase 'used it to ride' is awkward; after 'used it to' an infinitive is fine but context requires a clearer verb or particle. Better: 'used it to ride around' or 'rode it' to express habitual action.

× I used to ride it, uh, to the park near my house with my friends.

✓ I used to ride it to the park near my house with my friends.

Remove filler 'uh' for correctness. The structure 'used to ride' is correct for past habitual actions; ensure no extraneous words interrupt the sentence.

× I don't have bike right now, but yeah, before I had.

✓ I don't have a bike right now, but I did before.

Missing article 'a' before 'bike' is an article error (use 'a bike'). 'Before I had' is incomplete and awkward; use 'I did before' or 'I had one before' to form a complete past statement. Tense contrast kept present 'don't have' and past 'did before.'

× If you asked me if it's popular in my country, I would say yes because every Emirati person like to BA uh, like the bikes and uh, they ride it in Barks beach and everywhere you will go, you will.

✓ If you asked me whether they are popular in my country, I would say yes because many Emirati people like bikes and ride them on beaches and everywhere you go.

Several issues: use 'whether' rather than repeated 'if' for clarity; subject-verb agreement ('people like' not 'person like'); remove filler 'BA uh' and 'uh'; noun number and article: 'bikes' plural and 'ride them' to match plural. 'Barks beach' is likely 'beaches' or a place name; using 'beaches' and plural 'everywhere you go' is clearer. Also avoid repetition 'you will, you will.' Ensures correct verb agreement and clearer conjunction use.