Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and coherent: start with a clear topic sentence, use correct grammar (past simple), avoid fillers, finish your thought. Add one or two specific details and link them logically. For example: say who bought it, how your father helped, and what changed after a month. Use linking words like 'and' or 'then' to connect events.

Exemplo: Yes. My mother bought me a bicycle for my birthday when I was six, and my father initially put on training wheels to help me learn. After about a month, he removed the training wheels and I could ride on my own, which made me feel very proud.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then provide a clear reason with a specific example. Use more natural vocabulary (e.g., 'public transport' or 'the subway' instead of 'undergrounds') and avoid informal contractions like '’cause' in formal speaking. Use a linking phrase like 'because' or 'mainly because'.

Exemplo: I would say not very popular. Mainly, people prefer cars and public transport, such as buses and the subway, because the cities are busy and cycling infrastructure is limited. For instance, in my city there are few bike lanes, so many people feel it is unsafe to cycle.

× Yes, I had so my mom bought me as my birthday present and my dad used to umm help me first to start with the four wheels, but like a month later he.

✓ Yes, I did. My mom bought it for me as a birthday present, and my dad first helped me by putting on the training wheels, but about a month later he removed them.

This sentence has multiple sentence structure problems (ID 26): run-on fragments, missing object references, and unclear sequencing. 'I had so my mom bought me' is ungrammatical; it should be split into two sentences or clauses with appropriate verbs and objects. 'Brought me as my birthday present' should be 'bought it for me as a birthday present' to use the correct verb and object. 'My dad used to umm help me first to start with the four wheels' is awkward and unclear; use past simple 'helped' and specify 'putting on the training wheels' as the action. 'But like a month later he' is an incomplete clause; finish it with 'removed them.' Suggest practicing dividing ideas into clear clauses, ensuring each clause has a subject and a verb, and using explicit objects (it/them) to avoid ambiguity.

× I would say not really 'cause in my country a lot of people use other things such as cars and transportation with undergrounds more than the bike.

✓ I would say not really, because in my country a lot of people use other means of transport, such as cars and the underground, more than bicycles.

This sentence contains incorrect preposition and noun choices (ID 11). 'Cause' is colloquial; use 'because' in formal responses. 'Use other things' is vague — 'other means of transport' is more natural. 'Transportation with undergrounds' is incorrect; the correct term is 'the underground' or 'the subway.' Use 'more than bicycles' to match plural noun with 'a lot of people.' Also punctuation helps clarity. Suggest replacing informal words with standard vocabulary and using correct prepositions/articles for transport modes.