Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g. “No, I didn’t”), then give one or two specific, coherent reasons using correct phrasing and linking words. Avoid awkward expressions like “not legally aged” and “not onto bike.” Use simple, accurate vocabulary and keep it within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. I wasn’t allowed to ride one near my home because the roads were busy, and my parents preferred I walk or take the bus. As a result, I only learned to ride a bike when I was older.

Sugestão: Make your answer more specific and avoid vague, repeated phrases. Start with a clear opinion, then give 1–2 specific reasons with examples or brief comparisons, using linking words (e.g. “because”, “for example”, “however”). Don’t overclaim (e.g. “increases your status”) unless you explain it.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and shopping. For example, in cities you often see delivery workers and students cycling, and bike-sharing schemes have become common in recent years.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was not legally aged in order to ride a bike as well as I was not onto bike.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child because I was not legally old enough to ride a bike, and I was not into bikes.

The original sentence uses awkward and incorrect phrases: 'legally aged' should be 'legally old enough' to express age requirement (past tense context), and 'I was not onto bike' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'I was not into bikes' meaning I was not interested. Also replace 'as well as' with 'and' for natural coordination. Maintain past tense 'didn't have' and 'was' for consistency. Suggestion: Use 'old enough' after an age-related adjective and 'into' + noun to express interest.

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because bikes play very important role in our daily lives.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in our country because bikes play a very important role in our daily lives.

Missing definite article 'a' before 'very important role' is an article error affecting present-tense general statement. Add 'a' to make the noun phrase grammatical. Also keep present simple 'are' and 'play' for general truths.

× And it's also a sense of freedom and a sense of belonging, and it also increases your status as well.

✓ It is also a symbol of freedom and belonging, and it can also raise your social status.

Several issues: starting with 'And' is informal but acceptable in speech; however 'a sense of freedom and a sense of belonging' is repetitive—use 'a symbol of freedom and belonging' for concision. 'It also increases your status' is vague; use 'can also raise your social status' for clarity. 'Raises status' requires article 'your social status' to be natural. This corrects article and word-choice errors while preserving present-tense general statement.