Bike— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Give a direct topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two supporting details (age, who you rode with, what you did) using correct tense and linking words. Keep it natural and concise (max 3–4 sentences).

Exemplo: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle from about age six and I practised riding it every afternoon with my older brother. Because we lived near a park, we often rode there to play and sometimes entered small local races.

Sugestão: This is a good, clear answer with supporting detail. Improve it by adding a linking phrase and one specific statistic or comparison to show depth, and correct a small phrasing issue: use 'short distances' (plural). Keep it within 3–4 sentences and vary vocabulary slightly.

Exemplo: Yes, bikes are very popular in my country. For example, many people cycle along the Hunt River for exercise and relaxation, especially at weekends, and increasingly they use bicycles to commute short distances. In fact, cycling lanes and shared-bike schemes have grown a lot in recent years, which shows how common cycling has become.

× Yes, when I was a child I have experience which practice or bike with my.

✓ Yes, when I was a child I had experience practicing on a bike.

Problems: incorrect verb tense ('have' should be past 'had' to match 'when I was a child'), incorrect phrase structure ('experience which practice or bike with my' is ungrammatical), incorrect word choice ('practice' used as noun instead of gerund 'practicing') and incorrect pronoun 'my' with no noun. Suggestion: use past tense 'had' to match the time reference; use the gerund 'practicing' after 'experience' or restructure to 'I had experience riding a bike' for natural phrasing. Example improvements: 'I had experience riding a bike' or 'I had experience practicing on a bike.'

× Yes, I think bikes are very popular here. Many people cycle along the Hunt River for exercise and relaxation, especially on weekends, and biking is also becoming a common way to commute short distance.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are very popular here. Many people cycle along the Hunt River for exercise and relaxation, especially on weekends, and biking is also becoming a common way to commute short distances.

Problems: missing plural on 'short distance' which should be 'short distances' or use 'a short distance' with article; sentence structure otherwise fine. Suggestion: use appropriate plural or add an article to match meaning. Use 'short distances' when referring generally to brief commutes, or 'a short distance' if referring to a single short trip.