Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid extra fillers like "well", and correct grammar and capitalization. Keep to one or two sentences: state your status and the course and institution clearly.

Exemplo: I am a student studying for a Bachelor of Business Administration at Chandigarh Group of Colleges. I chose this course because I'm interested in business and management.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repetition and vague phrases like "very good" or "high reputation level" without examples. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I study at Chandigarh Group of Colleges in Mohali. The college is well-regarded locally for its business programs, and many alumni work in reputable companies.

Sugestão: Provide a structured answer: say yes/no, give one or two specific reasons, and avoid unclear phrases like "teaching in regulators" or "all these stuff." Use linking words (e.g., "because", "for example").

Exemplo: Yes, it's a good place to study because the campus has a comfortable learning environment and experienced faculty. For example, professors often share real business case studies in class.

Sugestão: State your suggested change clearly, give a reason, and one brief example of how it would help students. Avoid fillers and grammatical errors like "about to add more the creative skills."

Exemplo: Yes, I would like the college to offer more creative activities, such as dance and music classes, because they help students develop soft skills and relieve stress. For example, a weekly music club could improve teamwork and confidence.

Sugestão: Answer directly with correct grammar and one clear reason. Keep it concise and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" to connect your reason to the plan.

Exemplo: I plan to pursue a Master's in Business Administration because it will deepen my management knowledge and improve my career prospects in the business field.

× Well, I'm a student and pursuing a Bachelor of Business Administration from Chandigarh Group of colleges.

✓ Well, I'm a student and I am pursuing a Bachelor of Business Administration from Chandigarh Group of Colleges.

Problems: missing subject 'I' before 'pursuing' (sentence without a verb / sentence structure) and incorrect capitalization/number agreement in the institution name. Correction adds the subject and auxiliary verb 'am' to form a complete clause and capitalizes 'Colleges' to match the proper noun. Suggestion: Always include the subject and correct auxiliary for present continuous (I am + -ing) and use correct proper noun capitalization. Grammar problem type ID:26,22,1

× Well, I study in Chandigarh group of colleges in Mohali and the university is very good and also have a high reputation level of that university.

✓ I study at Chandigarh Group of Colleges in Mohali, and the university is very good and also has a high reputation.

Problems: wrong preposition 'in' for institutions (use 'at'), inconsistent capitalization of the college name, wordy and incorrect phrase 'reputation level of that university', and subject-verb agreement ('university... have' should be 'has'). Correction uses 'at' for place of study, fixes proper noun capitalization, simplifies the reputation phrase, and corrects verb to 'has'. Suggestion: Use 'study at' for institutions, ensure subject-verb agreement, and avoid redundant phrases. Grammar problem type ID:11,22,27,26

× Yes, it's a very good place and very comfortable environment there.

✓ Yes, it's a very good place and has a very comfortable environment.

Problems: sentence omits verb for second clause ('very comfortable environment there' lacks verb), and 'very comfortable environment there' has awkward word order. Correction adds the verb 'has' to complete the clause and places adjectives appropriately. Suggestion: Ensure each clause has a verb and use 'has a comfortable environment' to describe a place. Grammar problem type ID:23,13,26

× The old staff members and teaching in regulators are very good in nature and experienced all these stuff.

✓ The senior staff members and teaching regulators are very kind and experienced.

Problems: 'old' is inappropriate for people (use 'senior'), 'teaching in regulators' is unclear and likely wrong phrase, 'very good in nature' is awkward, and 'experienced all these stuff' is ungrammatical. Correction replaces 'old' with 'senior', clarifies 'teaching regulators' (if intended) or could be 'teaching staff', simplifies to 'very kind and experienced.' Suggestion: Use precise nouns ('staff' or 'teaching staff'), avoid 'in nature', and use 'experienced' without 'all these stuff'. If you meant 'teaching staff and regulators', name them clearly. Grammar problem type ID:12,26,13

× Well, I would like to make a change in my study institute about to add more the creative skills for the students such as like dance or musical instruments.

✓ I would like my institute to offer more creative skills classes for students, such as dance or musical instruments.

Problems: awkward and incorrect phrasing 'make a change in my study institute about to add more the creative skills', redundant 'such as like', and wrong noun phrase ordering. Correction uses a clear modal construction 'would like... to offer' and simplifies the object to 'creative skills classes'. Suggestion: Use 'I would like [someone] to [do something]' or 'I would like to see [something]' and avoid redundant words like 'such as like'. Grammar problem type ID:4,26,11

× Well, my future study plans to get the masters in the business administration and it's my dream as because of my field is a business that's why I want to pursue my masters degree.

✓ My future study plan is to get a master's degree in Business Administration, and it is my dream because my field is business, so I want to pursue a master's degree.

Problems: subject-verb structure missing ('my future study plans to get' is incorrect), missing articles and apostrophes for 'master's', redundant and awkward conjunctions ('as because of', 'that's why'). Correction restructures the sentence with 'plan is to', adds the article and apostrophe in 'master's degree', capitalizes the program name, and uses clear linking words. Suggestion: Use 'plan is to' or 'I plan to', use 'master's degree', and avoid redundant connectors. Grammar problem type ID:26,22,6