Study— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 答えをもっと簡潔にし、文法と語順のミスを直す必要があります。例えば職業を述べる際は職種の前に冠詞（a/an/the）が必要で、複数の職務を列挙するときは適切な動詞形や接続詞でつなぎます。また「for example my job」のような不要な挿入は避け、説明は2〜3文にまとめて自然な流れにしてください。発音や流暢さも改善の余地があります。

Exemplo: I'm a consultant. I help companies develop market strategies for other countries, analyze sales data and sometimes give presentations. These tasks require both analytical skills and clear communication.

Sugestão: 表現の正確さを改善する必要があります。"at my room"は不自然で、"in my room"が正しいです。また比較表現で"more better"は間違いなので単に"better"を使ってください。回答は短い主題文と1つの理由を述べる形にすると自然です。

Exemplo: I usually study English at home, especially in my room, because it's quiet and helps me concentrate better.

Sugestão: 回答は概ね良いですが、語の順序と冠詞に注意してください。"focus on study"より自然な表現は"focus on my studies"や"study"です。繋ぎ語（therefore, so, that's why）を１つに絞り、文を簡潔に保ちましょう。

Exemplo: Yes, it is. My room is very quiet, so I can focus on my studies easily; therefore I usually choose to study there.

Sugestão: 否定の回答は明確ですが、理由をより具体的に述べると説得力が増します。"now I feel comfortable"は現在形で十分なので"now"は不要。また"prefer my room's layout"より具体的な要素（lighting, desk, chair）を挙げると良いです。

Exemplo: No, I wouldn't. I'm comfortable with the current layout — the lighting is good and my desk and chair are arranged for efficient studying.

Sugestão: 文法と語順のミスが多く、時制の一致も不完全です。"at the at Graduate School"は誤りで、"at graduate school"あるいは"at a/the graduate school"を使います。"English skill"は通常"English skills"。現在進行形や現在完了を正しく使い、接続詞の重複（So ... So ...）を避けてください。具体的な計画（入学時期、準備科目）を一つ付け加えると良いです。

Exemplo: In the future I want to study International Marketing at a graduate school in the UK. First, I need to improve my English skills, so I have been practicing with an English teacher since this week.

× I'm working as consultant, for example my job.

✓ I'm working as a consultant; for example, this is my job.

The noun 'consultant' needs the article 'a' (article error, but listed under present participle form per allowed types?). Also the original sentence fragment 'for example my job' is unclear; rephrase to 'for example, this is my job' to make it a full sentence. Use punctuation to separate clauses. Suggestion: include the indefinite article before singular countable nouns and make each clause a complete sentence.

× Part of my job is to make a strategy of another country and analysis sales data and I sometimes make presentations.

✓ Part of my job is to develop strategies for other countries, analyse sales data, and sometimes give presentations.

Use parallel verb forms after 'is to' (base form) or rewrite: 'is to develop...,' and use plural 'strategies' for general activities. 'Analysis' is a noun; use the verb 'analyse'. Use 'for other countries' rather than 'of another country' for natural phrasing. Maintain parallel structure when listing activities. Suggestion: keep verbs in the same form and use plural when speaking generally.

× I usually study English at home, particularly at my room because it helps me concentrate more better.

✓ I usually study English at home, particularly in my room, because it helps me concentrate better.

Use 'in my room' not 'at my room'. 'More better' is redundant; use 'better' only. Include commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: use correct prepositions for locations and avoid redundant comparatives.

× Yes, I think so because my room is very quiet so I can focus on study easily.

✓ Yes, I think so because my room is very quiet, so I can focus on my studies easily.

Use 'focus on my studies' rather than 'focus on study'. Add comma before 'so' joining independent clauses. 'Easily' placement after the verb phrase is appropriate. Suggestion: use correct noun phrase 'my studies' and add punctuation for clarity.

× No, I wouldn't because now I feel comfortable. For example, I prefer my room's layout.

✓ No, I wouldn't because I feel comfortable now. For example, I prefer the layout of my room.

Move 'now' to natural position 'I feel comfortable now.' 'My room's layout' is understandable but 'the layout of my room' is more natural in formal English. Ensure pronouns and possessives are used in natural order. Suggestion: place adverbs in natural positions and prefer clearer possessive constructions.

× In the future I want to study international marketing at the at Graduate School in the UK.

✓ In the future, I want to study international marketing at a graduate school in the UK.

Remove duplicated 'at the at' and use 'a graduate school' unless a specific school is named (then use 'the'). Capitalization: 'Graduate School' is only capitalized for a specific institution. Include a comma after 'In the future'. Suggestion: correct prepositions and articles when referring to non-specific institutions.

× So at first I have to improve my English skill.

✓ First, I have to improve my English skills.

Use 'First' instead of 'So at first' for clarity. 'English skill' is uncountable singular here; 'English skills' is more natural when referring to overall ability. Use commas for clarity. Suggestion: use plural 'skills' when discussing language ability in general.

× So since this week I've practice with English teacher.

✓ Since this week I've been practising with an English teacher.

Use present perfect continuous 'have been practising' to show an action that started in the recent past and continues. 'Practice' should be 'practising' (British spelling) or 'practicing' (US). Include the article 'an' before 'English teacher'. Suggestion: use present perfect continuous for ongoing recent actions and include appropriate articles.