Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific details with linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary phrases.

Exemplo: I prefer casual, comfortable clothes because I’m a university student and I move around a lot. For example, I often wear baggy jeans and oversized hoodies because they feel relaxed and still look stylish.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a clear choice, then give one specific condition and an example. Use linking words (however, if, when) and finish the sentence; avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: It depends: I usually wear comfortable clothes for classes, but I choose smart clothes for formal events. For instance, if I have a presentation or a meeting, I wear a blazer and smart pants.

Sugestão: Be clearer and avoid filler words. State a single preference, then contrast with a recent change using linking words (however, nowadays). Correct verb forms (it makes → they make).

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T‑shirts because they are comfortable whether I’m at home or going out. However, nowadays I sometimes choose tighter tops because I feel they look more stylish and chic.

Sugestão: Organize the response: start with a direct answer, then explain reasons with sequencing words (first, then, finally). Avoid generalizations like 'universal problem' and correct vocabulary (furious → frustrated).

Exemplo: Yes, I often spend a long time choosing clothes because I own many items but still feel like I have nothing to wear. For example, when I’m getting ready I first search through my wardrobe, then try on a few options, and finally pick one at the last minute.

Sugestão: Give a clear contrasting statement and specific examples. Use linking words (on weekdays / at weekends) and avoid trailing or incomplete phrases.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart‑casual clothes for my internship, such as blazers and tailored pants. At the weekend I dress more freely—for example, I might wear jeans and a fitted top when I go out with friends.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement about your preference, then give specific reasons and one example. Avoid fillers and repetition (colorful colors).

Exemplo: I prefer monochrome colours, mainly black, grey and white, because they’re easy to mix and suit my style. For example, most of my outfits are black jeans paired with a white or grey top.

× I would say I am a university student and who likes to wear casual clothes which make me comfortable and stylish at the same time.

✓ I would say I am a university student who likes to wear casual clothes that make me comfortable and stylish at the same time.

Remove the extra 'and' and use the relative pronoun 'who' directly after 'student' to link the clause. Use 'that' (or 'which' with a comma) to introduce the defining relative clause about 'clothes'. This corrects improper pronoun placement and creates a clear, grammatical sentence.

× I would say I like to wear more like baggy clothes rather than the fitting clothes because it will make me more uncomfortable.

✓ I would say I prefer to wear baggier clothes rather than tight clothes because they make me more uncomfortable.

Use comparative form 'baggier' for adjective comparison and 'tight' instead of 'fitting' is more natural here. Change 'it will make me' to 'they make me' to match plural 'clothes' and present simple to express general preference.

× It depends on the situation like where I am going to what I'm going to do.

✓ It depends on the situation, like where I am going and what I am going to do.

Use 'and' to connect parallel clauses and include 'going' after 'where I am' to form a complete clause. The original omitted necessary structure and had incorrect sequencing of clauses.

× Is it like a event I have to go or I'm going to just my class?

✓ Is it an event I have to attend, or am I just going to my class?

Use the correct article 'an' before vowel sound 'event' and use verb 'attend' for events. Reorder the second clause to 'am I just going to my class' to form a proper question with auxiliary verb preceding the subject.

× I would say in my wardrobe there are a bunch of clothes which has.

✓ I would say in my wardrobe there are a bunch of clothes.

Remove the dangling relative clause 'which has' because it lacks an object and is ungrammatical. 'A bunch of clothes' is complete; if you want a relative clause, specify what the clothes have (for example, 'which I wear often').

× I like to wear shirt T-shirts because it make me really comfortable even though, even if I'm going out or staying in my house, umm, But these day I tend to wear more like tight fitting clothes because it makes me, I think it makes me more umm, stylish and a little bit chic.

✓ I like to wear T-shirts because they make me really comfortable whether I'm going out or staying at home. But these days I tend to wear tighter-fitting clothes because I think they make me look more stylish and a little chic.

Change 'shirt T-shirts' to 'T-shirts'. Use plural pronoun 'they' and plural verb 'make' to agree with 'T-shirts'. Use 'whether' for alternatives and 'at home' is more natural. 'These day' -> 'these days'. Use adjective 'tighter-fitting' and 'make me look' to express appearance. Fix capitalization and remove filler words.

× Yeah, for me, I think it's like a universal problem for girls, because even though I buy a lot of clothes, one it's the time to go out.

✓ Yeah, for me, I think it's a common problem for girls, because even though I buy a lot of clothes, when it's time to go out I...

Replace 'a universal problem' with 'a common problem' for naturalness. 'one it's the time' is ungrammatical; use 'when it's time'. The original had incorrect quantifier/phrase and sentence fragmentation.

× I don't have any choice of my clothes.

✓ I don't have any choice of what to wear.

Use the idiomatic phrase 'what to wear' rather than 'choice of my clothes'. This fixes sentence structure and makes the meaning clear.

× So I became very furious and then I tried to search every bit of my clothes in the wardrobe and then at the end I have to wear 1 and go out.

✓ So I become very frustrated and search through all my clothes in the wardrobe, and in the end I have to pick one and go out.

Use present simple 'become' to match habitual action. Replace 'furious' with 'frustrated' which is more appropriate. Use 'search through' and 'pick one' instead of 'wear 1'. Avoid numeric '1' and maintain consistent tense.

× Sure, since I am doing my internship I have to go to the company.

✓ Sure, since I am doing my internship, I have to go to the company.

Add a comma after 'internship' for clarity. The sentence is otherwise grammatically correct; punctuation improves readability.

× So in the weekdays I have to wear very like smart casual wear which I have to wear blazer and some coats and then some smart pants.

✓ So on weekdays I have to wear smart-casual clothes; I have to wear a blazer, some coats, and smart pants.

Use 'on weekdays' not 'in the weekdays'. Use hyphen 'smart-casual' and plural 'clothes'. Include articles 'a blazer' and commas in a list. Remove redundant 'have to wear' repetition.

× But in the weekends when I'm trying to go out with my friends or going on a date I have I can wear everything I like even though it's sexy or even.

✓ But on weekends when I go out with my friends or go on a date, I can wear whatever I like, even if it's sexy.

Use 'on weekends' not 'in the weekends'. Simplify 'when I'm trying to go out' to 'when I go out'. Use 'whatever' instead of 'everything' for clothing choices and complete the clause 'even if it's sexy'. Remove extraneous words.

× Oh, umm, my wardrobe, like the whole wardrobe is monochromic, which is grey and black.

✓ Oh, my wardrobe is basically monochromatic; it's mostly grey and black.

Use 'monochromatic' not 'monochromic' and streamline phrasing. 'Basically' is more natural than filler 'like the whole wardrobe'. Use semicolon or comma to join related clauses.

× Yeah, including white.

✓ Yes, including white.

Replace informal 'Yeah' with 'Yes' for clarity and formality. Otherwise the fragment is acceptable as a short spoken response.

× Umm, I would say I cannot find any pink or yellow or green clothes in my wardrobe.

✓ I would say I don't have any pink, yellow, or green clothes in my wardrobe.

Use contraction 'don't' for spoken style and list colors with commas. 'Cannot find' implies searching; 'don't have' states lack of those colors more directly.

× Umm, maybe because I don't like the colorful colors, I tend to wear black and white more.

✓ Maybe because I don't like bright colors, I tend to wear black and white more.

'Colorful colors' is redundant; use 'bright colors' or 'colorful clothes'. This makes the sentence concise and natural.