Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Begin with a clear topic sentence, correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, articles), avoid redundancy, and add one specific example or reason. Keep it within 3–4 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer loose, brightly coloured clothes rather than tight or plain black or white ones. This is because loose clothes are more comfortable for me and bright colours suit my personality. For example, I often choose a loose red blouse for social events since it makes me feel confident.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, then support with concise reasons using linking words. Fix grammar (use plural/singular correctly) and avoid filler phrases like 'it's OK'.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart outfits. I choose them because they allow me to move freely and I feel more relaxed. For instance, I often wear a casual shirt and jeans when I know I will be active during the day.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement and give relevant, specific reasons. Fix vocabulary and unclear phrases (e.g. 'dessert' is incorrect). Mention practical benefits like comfort, breathability, and ease of movement with linking words.

Exemplo: Yes, I love wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable and breathable, which helps when I am busy or active. For example, a cotton T-shirt absorbs sweat well and lets me move easily when I exercise or run errands.

Sugestão: Answer directly and briefly: state whether you spend time and explain why using clear linking words. Remove hesitations and correct grammar (e.g. 'it feels', 'I don't have many clothes').

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes spend time choosing clothes, but usually I end up wearing my first choice because it feels the most comfortable. Also, I don't have a large wardrobe, so my options are limited.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and provide clear reasons with correct vocabulary (replace 'dessert' with 'dress code' or 'attire'). Keep to 2–3 sentences and use linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

Exemplo: Yes, I wear different styles on weekdays and weekends. During the week I follow my workplace dress code, which sometimes requires a uniform or business attire, but at the weekend I usually wear casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly and give specific reasons using correct grammar (e.g. 'it gives me'). Avoid vague fillers like 'yeah' and be concise. Add a brief example of when you wear that colour.

Exemplo: I like red and have preferred it since childhood because wearing red makes me feel confident and calm. For example, I often choose a red dress for events when I want to stand out and feel secure.

× My favorite clothes is something that has to be loose, not a tight one and have to be a bright colour because I don't like to wear a black or just white colour.

✓ My favorite clothes are something that have to be loose, not tight, and have to be bright colors because I don't like to wear just black or white.

Subject 'clothes' is plural so verb must be 'are' (singular/plural issue). 'Clothes' and 'colors' are plural nouns; use plural forms. Remove 'a' before 'tight' and 'bright colour' because these are plural general descriptions. Use 'just black or white' instead of 'a black or just white colour' for natural phrasing. Suggestion: match noun number with verb and use plural adjectives appropriately.

× I think it's depends on the situation.

✓ I think it depends on the situation.

After 'it' with 'think' use base form 'depends' without auxiliary 'is'. Using 'it's depends' incorrectly combines 'it is' with a conjugated verb (present tense issue). Suggestion: use 'it depends' for habitual or general statements.

× I will.

✓ (If you mean 'I will' as an answer, supply context; otherwise remove.)

The fragment 'I will.' is incomplete and unclear as a response to the previous question (sentence structure error). If intending to continue, provide a full clause, e.g. 'I will choose comfortable clothes.' Suggestion: complete the sentence to show intention or remove the fragment.

× I prefer wearing comfortable and cheerful ones because not so many even that make me to have to wear smarter clothes.

✓ I prefer wearing comfortable and cheerful clothes because there are not many situations that force me to wear smarter clothes.

Phrase 'not so many even that make me to have to wear' is incorrect use of quantifiers and awkward structure. Use 'there are not many situations' to quantify contexts. Remove unnecessary 'to have to' duplication. Suggestion: use clear noun 'situations' and proper verb 'force' or 'require'.

× Why? Because I can move freely in wearing that clothes and it's OK.

✓ Because I can move freely when wearing those clothes, and that's OK.

Pronoun 'that' should be 'those' to match plural 'clothes' (incorrect use of pronouns). 'In wearing' is unnatural; use 'when wearing'. 'It's OK' referring to 'that' should be 'that's OK.' Suggestion: match demonstrative pronoun number and use natural preposition 'when'.

× I love wearing T-shirt.

✓ I love wearing T-shirts.

Count noun 'T-shirt' should be plural 'T-shirts' when speaking generally (article errors). Alternatively 'a T-shirt' if singular. Suggestion: use plural for general habits.

× Because there's a lot of thing that I have to do using dessert, and by using dessert I can move freely and feel relaxed, and it also can absorb many.

✓ Because there are a lot of things that I have to do wearing T-shirts, and by wearing T-shirts I can move freely and feel relaxed, and they also absorb sweat well.

Multiple errors: 'there's' + plural (items) is wrong—use 'there are' (singular/plural). 'Thing' should be plural 'things'. 'Using dessert' is incorrect word choice; should be 'wearing T-shirts' (preposition/word choice). 'It also can absorb many' is vague; clothes 'absorb sweat' and plural pronoun 'they'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms, correct verb 'wearing', and specify what is absorbed.

× I do actually, but at the end of the day, I go back to the first choice I make because it's feels really comfortable to me and actually in my cupboard there, there's no a lot of shirt, uh, clothes that I can use and.

✓ I do actually, but at the end of the day I go back to the first choice I make because it feels really comfortable to me, and actually in my cupboard there are not a lot of shirts or clothes that I can use.

Use 'it feels' not 'it's feels' (present tense issue). 'There's no a lot of shirt' should be 'there are not a lot of shirts' (subject-verb agreement and article errors). Remove trailing 'and' and filler words. Suggestion: keep 'it feels' and use 'there are not a lot of...' for plural nouns.

× Absolutely, because during weekdays I have to go to work and for working I have to wear specific clothes that demanded from the workplace like uniform or certain employees dessert and in the weekend I guess wear casual one.

✓ Absolutely. During weekdays I have to go to work, and I have to wear specific clothes required by the workplace, like a uniform or a company dress code; on the weekend I usually wear casual clothes.

Pronoun and noun errors: 'that demanded from the workplace' should be 'required by the workplace' (incorrect use of pronouns/phrasing). 'Certain employees dessert' is nonsensical—likely intended 'employee dress' or 'dress code'. Use 'on the weekend' -> 'at the weekend' or 'on weekends' and 'casual clothes' (plural) not 'casual one'. Suggestion: use 'required by' and 'dress code' and match plural forms.

× I like red. I always like red from my young age up until this time because I believe when wearing red clothes, it give me a sense of stability and sense of relaxation because yeah, it's I can gain.

✓ I like red. I have liked red since I was young because I believe that wearing red clothes gives me a sense of stability and relaxation.

Tense and verb form issues play a role, but primary is verb agreement: 'it give' should be 'they give' or 'wearing red clothes gives' (incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs and agreement). Use 'have liked' or 'have liked since I was young' for duration from past to present. Remove filler 'yeah, it's I can gain.' Suggestion: use 'have liked since' and 'gives me a sense of...' for clear expression.