Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Clarify grammar and word choice, avoid redundancy, and use linking words to make it coherent. Begin with a clear topic sentence, fix errors (e.g., 'when I wet them' -> 'when I wear them'), and shorten to 3–4 concise sentences. Add a specific example of an activity to support your preference.

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes such as jeans and T-shirts because they are comfortable and practical. For example, when I go hiking or meet friends at a café, jeans and a T-shirt let me move freely. Also, they are easy to wash and choose, so I wear them most days.

Sugestão: Make a direct statement first, then give one or two clear reasons without filler words like 'you know'. Correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm a very active girl') and use a linking word such as 'because' or 'so'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes rather than smart clothes because they help me feel relaxed. Also, because I'm very active, casual clothes suit my lifestyle and allow me to move easily.

Sugestão: Give a concise affirmative answer, remove fillers and unclear phrases. Explain briefly why you like T-shirts with a specific reason (e.g., comfort, style) and correct grammar ('they make me look younger'). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I wear T-shirts most days because they are comfortable and make me look younger. They also match well with jeans, which is my usual outfit for work and school.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give a precise time estimate and reason. Improve grammar ('I spend only about 5 to 7 minutes choosing clothes' and 'because I decide quickly'). Use one linking word such as 'because' to connect reason.

Exemplo: Not really. I usually spend only about five to seven minutes choosing clothes because I decide quickly and prefer simple outfits.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement about variation, then give a concise example. Remove repeated phrases and correct grammar ('I choose clothes that are more comfortable and practical'). Use linking words such as 'for example' and 'so' appropriately.

Exemplo: It depends on my mood. For example, if I'm going out with friends on the weekend, I usually choose more comfortable and practical clothes so I can be active.

Sugestão: Give a straightforward answer naming the colours, then provide clear, specific reasons. Fix grammar ('they are my favourite colours' and 'they make me feel luckier and look nicer'). Avoid vague expressions like 'use these colors'.

Exemplo: My favourite colours are green and light blue because they suit my skin tone and make me feel calm. I also feel a bit luckier and more confident when I wear those colours.

× I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirt because I feel very comfortable when I wet them and it's also give me a chance to do some outdoor activities and also hang out with my friends.

✓ I prefer casual clothes like jeans and T-shirts because I feel very comfortable when I wear them and it also gives me a chance to do outdoor activities and hang out with my friends.

Errors: 'wet' is the wrong verb form and word; the correct verb is 'wear' (verb choice). 'T-shirt' should be plural with 'jeans' when referring to a category: 'T-shirts'. 'it's also give' has incorrect subject-verb agreement and verb form: 'it also gives'. Suggestions: use 'wear' not 'wet'; make nouns plural when speaking generally (T-shirts); ensure subject and verb agree (it gives).

× I think I good likes to wear comfortable and casual clothes because it's, you know, have me feel more relaxed and comfortable when I go outside and also, you know, I'm very active girl so it suits me a lot.

✓ I think I generally like to wear comfortable and casual clothes because they make me feel more relaxed and comfortable when I go outside and, you know, I'm a very active girl so they suit me a lot.

Errors: 'I good likes' is incorrect word order and form; use 'I generally like' (adverb placement). 'it's, you know, have me feel' uses wrong subject and verb; refer to 'they' (clothes) and use 'make me feel'. 'I'm very active girl' lacks an article; use 'a very active girl'. 'it suits me' should agree with plural 'clothes' -> 'they suit me'. Suggestions: place adverbs before main verb, match pronouns to plural nouns, include articles where required.

× Yes of course 100% I wear T-shirts every day when I go to work and also I go to school as well. Umm is look is make me feel much younger and yeah also suit for my.

✓ Yes, of course. I wear T-shirts every day when I go to work and when I go to school as well. Their look makes me feel much younger and they also suit me.

Errors: run-on and missing punctuation; 'is look is make' is ungrammatical — use 'Their look makes'. 'suit for my' is incorrect: use 'they suit me' (correct verb and pronoun). Suggestions: break into sentences, use appropriate pronouns for clothes (they/their), ensure subject-verb agreement ('look makes').

× Not really, I spend less time to choose clothes, maybe around like 5 to 7 minutes because I make a decision is very quickly especially for choosing a clothes.

✓ Not really. I spend little time choosing clothes, maybe around 5 to 7 minutes, because I make decisions very quickly, especially when choosing clothes.

Errors: 'spend less time to choose' uses incorrect structure; use 'spend little time choosing' or 'take less time to choose'. 'I make a decision is very quickly' is ungrammatical; use 'I make decisions very quickly'. 'a clothes' incorrect article and number. Suggestions: use correct verb patterns ('spend time doing'), pluralize 'decisions' and 'clothes' appropriately, and remove unnecessary words like 'like'.

× I think it depends on my feeling and my emotion on that day. For example, sometimes when I feel very happy and I go to like go outside to play with my friends. So I used to choose some clothes is more comfortable and like practical.

✓ I think it depends on my mood that day. For example, sometimes when I feel very happy and go outside to play with my friends, I choose clothes that are more comfortable and practical.

Errors: 'feeling and my emotion' wordy and slightly incorrect; use 'mood'. 'I go to like go outside' is awkward; use 'go outside'. 'I used to choose' implies habitual past; use present 'I choose'. 'some clothes is' wrong subject-verb agreement and missing relative clause: use 'clothes that are'. Suggestions: prefer 'mood', simplify phrases, use present tense for habitual actions, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct relative clauses.

× I love green and light blue because they choose color as my favorite one and also sometimes when I use these colors it's make me like more lucky and also more beautiful when I go outside.

✓ I love green and light blue because I choose those colors as my favorites and sometimes when I wear these colors they make me feel luckier and more beautiful when I go outside.

Errors: 'they choose color as my favorite one' misuses pronoun subjects; the student chooses colors, not colors choosing. Use 'I choose those colors as my favorites'. 'when I use these colors it's make me like more lucky' incorrect verb and structure; use 'when I wear these colors they make me feel luckier'. Suggestions: ensure subject performs the action, use correct verbs ('choose', 'wear', 'make me feel'), use comparative 'luckier', and correct pluralization ('favorites').