Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid repetition (e.g. 'casual' and 'casual bright colored clothes' repeated). Improve grammar: use 'bright-colored' and avoid 'I feel like I'm a little bit nervous' (use 'I feel nervous').

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because they are more comfortable. For example, bright-colored T-shirts and jeans make me feel relaxed and confident, whereas formal, monotone clothes tend to make me feel nervous.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repeating the same idea, and use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Use more precise phrasing ('bright casual clothes' rather than 'bright casual wearing').

Exemplo: I prefer casual clothes because they make me comfortable and upbeat. For example, wearing a bright T-shirt and jeans lifts my mood, whereas smart clothes can feel restrictive and formal.

Sugestão: Give a concise direct answer, correct grammar (plural/singular and articles), and provide one clear example. Replace 'a lot of kinds of design' with 'many designs' and correct tense/word choice ('when I travel' instead of 'when I try').

Exemplo: Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because they come in many designs. For example, when I travel to famous places I often buy souvenir T-shirts with the city's name and wear them afterwards.

Sugestão: Make your reason clear and concise, correct grammar and reduce redundancy. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly. Replace informal phrases ('gonna') and awkward expressions ('see it fits me or not deeply') with clearer language.

Exemplo: Yes, I usually spend a lot of time choosing clothes because I don't want to waste money on items that don't suit me. Therefore, I try them on carefully to ensure they fit well and match my style.

Sugestão: Give a direct, complete answer and avoid confusion. Correct the mixed-up explanation (weekdays vs weekends) and finish your sentence. Use linking words like 'because' and provide a clear contrast between weekday and weekend styles.

Exemplo: Yes. On weekdays I wear smart, business-style clothes for work because the office has a formal dress code, but on weekends I usually dress casually in T-shirts and jeans to relax.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid repetition ('white color' twice). Use 'colour' or 'color' consistently and correct grammar and word choice ('matches any colour', 'silver accessories' instead of 'silver costume'). Use past tense consistently in the example.

Exemplo: I prefer white because it matches almost any other colour, such as pink, black or blue. For example, when I went to Hawaii I wore a white T-shirt with silver accessories like a small silver bag.

× I like wearing casual style clothes because I feel more comfortable when I wear casual bright colored clothes.

✓ I like wearing casual-style clothes because I feel more comfortable when I wear bright, casual clothes.

Use of compound adjective 'casual-style' requires a hyphen; 'bright colored' should be 'bright, casual' or 'bright-colored' as adjective. Also avoid repeating 'casual' twice; reordering improves clarity. Grammar problem type ID:8

× When I wear formal and monotone clothes I feel like I'm a little bit nervous.

✓ When I wear formal, monotone clothes I feel a little nervous.

Omit 'like' before 'I'm' when stating a feeling; 'a little bit nervous' is wordy—'a little nervous' is more natural. Comma after 'clothes' improves readability. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I prefer wearing casual clothes because as I said, I can feel comfortable when I wear casual clothes and also it helps me to be positive when I wear bright casual wearing.

✓ I prefer wearing casual clothes because, as I said, I feel comfortable in them and they help me feel more positive when I wear bright casual clothes.

Avoid 'can feel' (unnecessary modal), use 'feel'; 'wear casual clothes' is fine but 'bright casual wearing' is incorrect — use 'bright casual clothes'. Pronoun 'them' replaces repetition. Matches present habitual tense. Grammar problem type ID:8

× Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirt has a lot of kinds of design.

✓ Yes, I like wearing T-shirts because T-shirts have a lot of different designs.

Subject should agree in number with verb: plural 'T-shirts' requires 'have'. 'A lot of kinds of design' is awkward; use 'different designs'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× For example, when I visit some well known traveling spot they have the T-shirts with the name of the city.

✓ For example, when I visit some well-known tourist spots, they sell T-shirts with the name of the city.

Use hyphen in 'well-known'; 'traveling spot' is awkward—'tourist spot' or 'tourist attraction' is better; add comma; 'have the T-shirts' should be 'sell T-shirts'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× I always buy it and wear it when I try.

✓ I always buy one and wear it when I visit.

Pronoun 'it' lacks clear antecedent and number; 'one' refers to a T-shirt. 'When I try' is unclear—use 'when I visit' or 'when I go there'. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Yes, because I don't want to waste my money even though if I spend a lot of time it gonna be a waste of time.

✓ Yes, because I don't want to waste my money; even though I may spend a lot of time, that could be a waste of time.

Use proper modal 'may' instead of 'if' after 'even though'; 'gonna' is informal and ungrammatical—use 'could be' or 'would be'. Also split into clearer clauses. Grammar problem type ID:4

× But I can choose clothes very carefully and I can see it fits me or not deeply.

✓ But I choose clothes very carefully and check thoroughly whether they fit me or not.

Avoid repeated 'I can'; use simple present for habitual actions. 'See it fits me or not deeply' is ungrammatical—use 'check thoroughly whether they fit me'. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So that's why I spend a lot of time choosing it.

✓ So that's why I spend a lot of time choosing them.

Pronoun 'it' should be plural 'them' to refer to 'clothes'. Also 'So that's why' is redundant but acceptable; maintain meaning. Grammar problem type ID:26

× Yes, this is because the situation on between on weekdays and on weekends is totally different.

✓ Yes, this is because the situation on weekdays and weekends is totally different.

Remove unnecessary prepositions 'on' and 'between on'; use 'on' optionally before both or neither. Simplify to 'on weekdays and weekends' or 'between weekdays and weekends'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× For example, on weekends I usually work at in the office so I wear casual formal business style, but on weekends I.

✓ For example, on weekdays I usually work in the office, so I wear formal business attire, but on weekends I wear casual clothes.

Original sentence has several problems: 'work at in the office' has extra prepositions—use 'work in the office'; 'casual formal business style' is contradictory—use 'formal business attire' for weekdays and 'casual clothes' for weekends. Also the clause 'but on weekends I.' is incomplete and needs a verb. Grammar problem type ID:23

× I prefer white color because white color matches any kinds of color like pink, black and blue.

✓ I prefer white because white matches any color, such as pink, black, and blue.

Avoid repeating 'color'; use 'white' alone. 'Any kinds of color' is incorrect—use 'any color'. 'Like' is okay but 'such as' is more formal. Grammar problem type ID:13

× For example, when I went to Hawaii, I wear white T-shirts with silver costume like silver bags.

✓ For example, when I went to Hawaii, I wore white T-shirts with silver accessories like silver bags.

Mixing past 'went' with present 'wear' is incorrect; use past 'wore'. 'Silver costume' is unidiomatic—use 'silver accessories'. Grammar problem type ID:5