Clothing— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers (uh, um) and repetition. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, and, also).

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, seasonal clothes. For everyday wear I usually choose cotton T-shirts and jeans because cotton is breathable and comfortable, and light colours suit warm weather.

Sugestão: Answer directly (state preference), then give a clear reason with one linking word. Reduce hesitations and correct tense/agreement errors. Be specific about how comfort helps you.

Exemplo: I prefer comfortable, casual clothes because they make me feel confident and allow me to move freely while working or commuting.

Sugestão: Give a concise topic sentence and then add one specific detail (when or which types). Avoid repetition and use vocabulary precisely (e.g., 'striped' not 'strip stripes').

Exemplo: Yes, I often wear T-shirts for daily and casual office days because they are comfortable. I prefer T-shirts with simple patterns, such as stripes or small logos.

Sugestão: Be direct and explain one reason with a specific detail. Avoid long repetitive descriptions. Use a linking word to connect reason and example (for example, because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I usually spend a long time choosing clothes because I like to try several sizes and styles to find the best fit, especially when shopping at a supermarket or a large store.

Sugestão: Start with a clear contrast sentence (yes/no + short explanation), then give one specific weekday vs weekend example. Remove fillers and repeats.

Exemplo: Yes, I dress differently: on weekdays I usually wear jeans and plain T-shirts for comfort, but on weekends I choose smarter or more colourful outfits when I go out with my family.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence then two concise supporting reasons. Avoid repetition and simplify wording. Use linking words (for example, because, and).

Exemplo: I prefer white clothes because they are easy to match with different jeans or skirts, and they work well in any season—light in summer and easy to layer in winter.

× I like to wear very comfortable clothes according to seasons, uh, uh, which are used like, I like to wear comfort, uh, clothes which are made-up of a cotton fabric and a light and a light in colours and, uh, and I like to wear, wear jeans.

✓ I like to wear very comfortable clothes according to the seasons. I prefer clothes made of cotton that are light in colour, and I also like to wear jeans.

The original sentence has awkward word order and repeated words. 'Made-up of a cotton fabric' is incorrect; use 'made of cotton' and 'light in colours' should be 'light in colour'. Also split into two clear sentences and remove repetitions to improve clarity and adjective usage.

× Yes, I like to wear comfortable clothes as it gave me a as it uh, gave me a feeling of confidence and I, uh, I feel they gave me a, a free moments. Give me a free moments to work.

✓ Yes, I like to wear comfortable clothes because they give me a feeling of confidence and give me free moments to work.

The tense is inconsistent: 'gave' (past) conflicts with the general statement. Use present simple 'give' for habitual facts. Also 'a free moments' is incorrect plural/article use; use 'free time' or 'free moments' without 'a'.

× Yes, I like to wear T-shirts in my in my daily wear or office wears because they give me a comfortable look.

✓ Yes, I like to wear T-shirts in my daily life or at the office because they give me a comfortable look.

Redundant 'in my in my' and uncountable use 'daily wear' is better as 'daily life' or 'daily wear' without 'my'. 'Office wears' is incorrect plural; use 'at the office'. Maintain present simple for habitual action.

× On the other hand, T-shirts. I like T-shirts with variable designs like like strip stripes or a logo.

✓ I like T-shirts with different designs, such as stripes or logos.

'On the other hand' is unnecessary and 'variable' is awkward; use 'different'. Remove duplicate 'like'. 'Strip stripes' is incorrect; use 'stripes'. Use plural 'logos' or singular 'a logo' consistently.

× Yes, I think I spend a lot of time while choosing clothes whenever I go to any supermarket for by some clothes I tried many times, many times clothes and changing again and again to try them out and I be.

✓ Yes, I think I spend a lot of time choosing clothes. When I go to a supermarket to buy clothes, I try on many items and change them again and again to see how they fit.

Original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. Use 'buy' instead of 'by', 'try on' for clothing, and restructure into two clear sentences. Remove trailing incomplete 'and I be'.

× Yes Sir, I often try different style of clothes in weekend and weekdays.

✓ Yes, sir. I often try different styles of clothes on weekends and weekdays.

Use plural 'styles' for countable noun and preposition 'on weekends and weekdays'. Capitalization aside, maintain present simple 'often try' which is correct.

× In weekdays whenever I go outside of outside I try I I pair up my style with jeans and T-shirts while in weekends when I when we I when I go outside for outing with my family I tried.

✓ On weekdays, whenever I go out I pair my style with jeans and T-shirts, while on weekends when I go out for an outing with my family I try different outfits.

Use 'on weekdays' and 'go out' instead of 'go outside of outside'. 'Pair up my style with' is better as 'pair my style with'. Change tense 'I tried' to present 'I try' for habitual actions and simplify wording.

× I like white colour clothes because they because I can pair up with the pair up them with any coloured any coloured Jean and skirts and and also I can wear a white coloured in any season.

✓ I like white clothes because I can pair them with any coloured jeans or skirts, and I can wear white in any season.

Avoid redundancy: 'white colour clothes' should be 'white clothes'. Remove repeated phrases 'because they because' and 'pair up with the pair up them'. Use plural 'jeans' and correct word order. 'White coloured' is unnecessary; simply 'wear white' is natural.